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For Jozef (tatara) - Ragged Touch


For Jozef (tatara) - Ragged Touch
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Copyright: David Lazic (Natasa-David) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 283 W: 61 N: 752] (3833)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-09
Categories: Artwork, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Imagination...and Dreams... [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-11-24 3:06
Viewed: 369
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 54
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I told you I will, in a close future, post photos that I dedicate to all of you, my dear friends here on TL. They will appear not by my bigger or smaller sympaties to any of you, but by the order they are born in my mind, and finaly produced by the order that my immagination instructs.

Inspired by many beautiful comments and critiques, I made todays shot for my dear friend artworker Jozef (tatara), who was great support and inspiration.

This piece was one of my hardest to work on because of the specific story I had in my head, and to keep up with "my thing" of making one base story (I have) and multiple stories that can be obvious to all viewers.

Jozef, thank you for everything!
piccolina, Juliet, cunejo200, Fortuna, szekelykristof, taftabit, mi_per, boreocypriensis, tatara, mvdisco, mbrito, Teresat, ayse51, mortcdz, boomcat has marked this note useful
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To ayse51: Thank you NeclaNatasa-David 1 11-27 07:37
To Teresat: Thanks so Much Teresa!Natasa-David 1 11-27 07:36
To mbrito: You're one of the reare...Natasa-David 2 11-26 04:33
To AleksaSrbin: THX ALXNatasa-David 1 11-25 13:52
To billy-m: I ovde si pogodila poentuNatasa-David 1 11-25 13:50
To hay_kes: It was a great dream!Natasa-David 1 11-25 13:38
To jazrr: The ghost is PP -ed... hardly! :-)Natasa-David 1 11-25 13:35
To mvdisco: Thanks MichelNatasa-David 1 11-25 13:33
To tatara: Cetvrti put...Natasa-David 1 11-25 13:32
To boreocypriensis: Thanks!Natasa-David 1 11-25 03:05
To Matylda76: Hehe, yes, white lady...Natasa-David 1 11-24 11:14
To coed1992: Thanks AndresNatasa-David 1 11-24 11:11
To Nushy: Hvala Nuša!Natasa-David 1 11-24 11:09
To mi_per: Odlicna percepcija, ponovo! :-)Natasa-David 1 11-24 11:07
To taftabit: You're next! ;-)Natasa-David 1 11-24 11:04
To szekelykristof: Great critique!Natasa-David 1 11-24 11:02
To skobek: Thanks Slawa! :-)Natasa-David 1 11-24 10:58
To nicou: Thanks NicouNatasa-David 1 11-24 10:56
To Fortuna: Thank you SergioNatasa-David 1 11-24 10:52
To ravenvillareal: Thanks RavenNatasa-David 1 11-24 10:49
To cunejo200: Thanks so much DaniloNatasa-David 1 11-24 10:46
To lele: Thanks!Natasa-David 1 11-24 05:10
To Juliet: Thanks JulietNatasa-David 1 11-24 05:07
To piccolina: Kao i uvek...Natasa-David 1 11-24 05:06
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Critiques [Translate]

Dragi David,

divan poklon za Jozefa. Fotografija je najbolji poklon koji čovek može da primi.

Kao uvek...ODLIČNA FOTKA. :) Iznad svega kompozicija mi se sviđa. Odličan kadar i ideja.

Izuzetan rad , odlično svetlo i atmosfera.

Puno pozdrava!

Staša

HI David,
Nice use of light and shadows. A good view here. Complimented by a nice choice for framing. TFS Julie

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 814 W: 51 N: 1717] (11169)
  • [2008-11-24 3:42]
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ciao david..bellissimo lavoro..soggetto impeccabile..grande composizione..soggetto affascinante..grande lavoro
complimenti
lele

Hello David,
Looks like a dreamscape. QUite attractive and impressive. Cemeteries during autumn are also a favorite place of mine to trek and take pictures. The composition and color rendition look very nostalgic. My compliments...Danilo

great color harmony..like it so much

well done!

tfs,
raven

Hello David,

It's an excellent experiment about lights and shadows, very well framed and presented.
Congratulations and TFS.
Sergio

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1307 W: 0 N: 2598] (20817)
  • [2008-11-24 5:24]
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Hello,

Quel effet, c'est me4rveilleux, une superbe image trčs travillée avec une ambianc mystčrieuse, superbe.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

Hi David,
surrealistic vision, surrealistic picture. Very creativ artwork. Individual look for (un)reality (world). Bird and ghost - bird it's ghost?
Regards - Slawek

Hi David,
Again a mysterious composition from you, this time with a ghost. I like your series, you used the light very well, ad the autumn colours are beautiful on these last two pictures of you. You have a good fantasy and creativity for such compositions and you realize your idea very well with PP works. Great job again! TFS.
Best wishes,
Kristof

hey David
skidam kapu pred odlicnim radom i pedivnom poklonu za naseg Jozefa :))
predivno
T

Zdravo David
Odlican rad i interesantan poklon.
Dopada mi se ova misticnost cele slike,meka svetlost...drvored...
Al ipak ,nadam se da ce ova devojka naci izlaz kroz ona vrata...... tamo na kraju drvoreda:)
Pozdrav Mitko

Zdravo David,

ne mogu da verujem...stvarno ne mogu da verujem da postoji tako divna fotka na ovome svetu. ;)

Pridružujem se hvalama.

Puno pozdrava,

Nuša

a dreamy place here David, wonderful impressive colors, this one really tells a story with a nice depth of composition.well done.two thumbs up!
regards...............andres

witaj David;
this time white misterious lady;)
excellent looking path through the cementary; lovely autumn tones; warm and full of sun lights;
great moody presentation, nice friendly dedication; well done
pozdrav from Poland
Karolina

Hi David
Another excellent view enriched with autumnal colours.
TFS and cheers,
Bayram

Uh Davide, ne mogu ti reći koliko sam ujedno prijatno iznenađen i u istom momentu bez texsta..Znaš da uvek pustim da prvo prenoći fotografija , pa tek onda hladne glave dam komentar..
Sad si me uhvatio da ne kažem nespremnog , ali ću ipak pokušati...
Pre svega bih ti se zahvalio na posvećenom radu, i jako mi je drago ako sam imao ikakav uticaj na tebe i tvoje radove ..
Fotografiju si obradio na zaista visokom nivou i uspeo si da napraviš tako sjajnu atmosferu tj naterao si me ponovo, da je gledam veruj mi malo poduže...
Drugo što sam primetio je to što si ukombinovao u svoj rad i sliku devojke , koja je još više upotpunila ukupan utisak o slici..
Ono što mi je najviše drago je to što si ovde apsolutno uspeo da potisniš svu onu mračnu scenu sa jednom novom ,koja se možda samo u mašti doživljava..
Da te više ne davim ,svestan si ti svog kvaliteta i samo bih ti se zahvalio još jednom na ovom lepom znaku pažnje ,i želim ti sve najbolje u daljem radu na nekim novim projektima..
Puno pozdrava
JozefK

Bonjour David,
Amazing compositon and presentation,
lovely contrast and great colours ,
Excellent POV. and DOF.
Very well done.
Michel

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  • jazrr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 72 N: 82] (1883)
  • [2008-11-24 15:55]
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Hi David:
Fantastic work. Great colors and composition. Great timing for the bird. And the ghost?
Regards,
Jafar

Hi David,
What an amazing and dreamlike shot vit excellent POV, colours and perspective.TFS.
Pozdrav,

hAyAti

E,posto ni ova nije izuzetak sa pricom...evo moje verzije...kao san,...ili just like heaven...
Spinning on that dizzy edge
I kissed her face and kissed her head
And dreamed of all the different ways I had
To make her glow.....he said...
Why won’t you ever knows that I’m in love with
You Soft and only
You Lost and lonely
You Strange as angels
Dancing in the deepest oceans
Twisting in the water

You’re just like a dream

Daylight licked me into shape
I must have been asleep for days
And moving lips to breathe her name
I opened up my eyes
And found myself alone alone
Alone above a raging sea
That stole the only girl I loved
And drowned her deep inside of me
You Soft and only
You Lost and lonely
You
Just like heaven

Nadam se da se moja prica dopada i tebi i Jozefu....prica o snovima,masti,potrbi da se ode negde u neki drugi svet,da se ode pravo u san....

topli pozdravi za obojicu
biljana

Vrlo lepa i snažna fotka!
Pozdrav drugar!
A.

Hello David,
Great dark tones and excelent compo in this tree-lined avenue (of death).
Seems an invitation... But I say: «Lost souls must have caution, must follow ways far from this pleasant tree-lined avenue in whose end only waits the «ragged touch» of a death kiss, and the entrance in the alive death.
Believe me! Go away! I'm Crow the Guardian, and I know».
Great mood again David.
Hugs, mb

Boa noite David
This is a wonderful complete and endless feeling.
Love it.
Thanks
My regards
teresat

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1707 W: 124 N: 1462] (20612)
  • [2008-11-25 15:51]
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Zdravo David,
beautiful composition and presentation.Congratulations.TFS.Pozdrav.Necla.

Nice piece of PP work - the "ghost" fits in with the rest of the picture and the colours give a slightly dreamy feel to the picture. I like the addition of the crow in the picture as well, good piece of gothic imagery.
Thanks for sharing....Mark

hello David,

today i went to checked your gallery.. im so impressed by so many of your artworks.. you are so good.. i particular love this one.. oh boy! how come i miss your work before.. this was last year.. must be the time different.. :P beautiful effect you used on this one.. very moody.. my type of artwork that i like..

colours and everything here is perfect.. love it.. very well done..

regards, terry

sorry David for not checking this out earlier it is a excellent piece of photography grt colours excellent details and very well presented tfs
regards bryan

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