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Snow borne sorrow


Snow borne sorrow
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Copyright: jozef kozan (tatara) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 64 N: 401] (3779)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-20
Categories: Nature, Artwork, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-17 12:39
Viewed: 391
Points: 56
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Strip the branches
Unsheathe the hatchets
The threads of friendship
Are coming off

The teeth of lawyers
Man the trenches
Bands of betrothal
Are coming off

But if we’re good
If we’re kind
But if we’re good
Generous and kind
We’ll inhabit their sunsets
Their goddesses and queens
We’ll try to do the right thing

Snow Borne Sorrow

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 660 W: 56 N: 953] (8004)
  • [2009-04-17 13:16]

Hello Josef,

Just like the effect you adopted to this shot!
It surely depicts 'sorrow'. Nature is dead here!
The soft and tender look are pleasing!
Very good experiment!
Regards.

Francis Xavier

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 553 W: 0 N: 1534] (8955)
  • [2009-04-17 13:25]

Witaj Jozef!

Splendid and original road to.....?.
Beautiful colours and light...pretty!
I congratulate idea and realization.

I greet warmly.
Barbara

Hello Josef!
I love this fractalius effect!
Excellent atmosphere and nice colours!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1404 W: 31 N: 3046] (12342)
  • [2009-04-17 15:23]

HI Josef
Ilove how you keep us wondering.... how did he do this?
It has a look of porcelain especially on the bottom part.Porcelain filter perhaps? And do I detect a bit of fractal on the branches.?
What ever you used its beautiful and well done.
Dot

Bajkovito, lep rad.
Pozdrav, Nebojsa.

hello Jozef,

i know this effect.. i see quite a lot of this kind of work.. i think your work is the 1st one i see in black and white well almost.. :) it look strange, moody and sad just like the haunting song of DS.. i hope you don't feel that way..

tfs, terry

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  • suzy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 425 W: 38 N: 1262] (4338)
  • [2009-04-18 1:37]

magic, *hunting* sorrowful but effective and charming in the way you created an amazing effect and mood, darkness and light, smooth clouds and sharp tree edges, lots of meaningful details that is realized perfectly here.. brillient composition...
kind regards and greetings Josef
suzy

Zdravo Jozef
Veoma prepoznatljivo i lepo
Sve je bas onako u tvom stilu
i malo "blaze" nego inace ali nista manje lepo
pozdrav,Braca

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 814 W: 51 N: 1717] (11169)
  • [2009-04-18 3:43]

ciao jozef
soggetto molto drammatico
grande pov
complimenti
lele

Sjajan rad komšija!Pozdrav!A.

I ova je sjajna Jozef, ne smem ni da pitam kako to radiš,
ne bih se usudila ni da probam :)
Mnogo pozdrava
Zorica

This effect is magic.....but from you...it's wonderful...
Claude

odlican artwork prijatelju :)
srecni praznici i Hristos Voskrese
T

Hi Jozef!
Sad, peaceful, beautiful... Super composition.
Very nice and interesting texture; fine and silky.
Thanks, udvozlettel, Csilla

Zdravo Jozef
neznam gde pronalazis ove efekte,ali jedno znam...ovo je veoma kreativno prijatelju.
originalan rad,svaka cast Jozef.
pozdrav
Mitko:)

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  • kanton Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 703 W: 5 N: 1259] (5276)
  • [2009-04-20 10:14]

Zdravo Jozef!- Χριστος ανεστη
Wonterful capture and compo,
great colours,tones and effect,
another impressive pp work!!

Well done
pozdrav
Kostas

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  • Mravka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 203 W: 0 N: 140] (5372)
  • [2009-04-20 13:17]

zdravo jozef,

ubava kompozicija, originalna tehnika i
odlicna atmosfera

pozdrav, biljana

Treba biti obazriv ako se sminkas efemernoscu. To se najteze otire. Hrabrost je: umeti poceti.
Jos veca: umeti prestati.

Ne svrstavaj se u one koji sa oka ne skidaju estradne koprene vida. I smeskaju se oblikom,
a ne ukusom usana.

Ne uzvisuj se prenisko. Skitaj u sopstvenom ritmu i u sopstvenom smeru kroz naprsle blizine.
Stvarnost je kao odeca. Nije vazno sta nosis , nego kako ti stoji. Prekini sa oblacenjem, moda
je sezonska umetnost. I budi dovoljno oprezan kad nesto glasno izgovaras, sanjaru nad sanjarima.
Govor je umetnost budnih.


Sjajna slika kao i uvek...Za nju ne treba komentar...Uzivanje je gldeati je u tisini....gledati i cutati...gledati i uzivati...

A prethodni citat se odnosi na onu koja ce tek uledati svetlost dana...Milsim da je Mika savrseno rekao,ono sto sam ja pokusavala da kazem i objasnim....

pozdrav dragi moj JozefK...i uvek budi svoj i razlicit...

biljana

Boa tarde jozef
You are in D. sylvian mood and it´s great t. The atmosphere works really well. when we are tired of these human things we can travel to the gods and queen s and maybe this could be better.
Love the mood of your artwork.
My regards
teresat

Dobro vece Jozef,

prva misao...put u pakao. Ovo mi zasita izgleda kao *road to oblivion*...mozda zbog atmosfere...mozda zbog hladnih tonova ili...mozda jer se ja u ovom momentu osecam kao da idem u posetu djavolu. Eh...zivot nije uvek bajka i ovaj rad me podsetio na to.

Ponekad moramo puzati i plakati, da bi naucili hodati i smejati se.

Puno pozdrava,

Stasa

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3307 W: 788 N: 4423] (19902)
  • [2009-04-22 21:30]

Hi Josef,
What a moody and poetic image!
The ambience is totally dreamy!
I adore this soft blue / gray and brown coloured harmony! Did you use the "fractalius filter" for this one? If this is the case, you worked it very finely! If not, you are a magician!:)
Bravo and thanks too, for the good music!
Annie

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2009-04-25 14:52]

Hi Jozef

The filter you have used has really created a very nice effect and the b/w matches the title. I like the verse too, which so nicely combines with the image.

Argiris

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1626 W: 118 N: 2805] (11304)
  • [2009-04-27 6:00]

Hi Josef
Another fantastic artwork on a very well taken photo. Excellent magic atmosphere, difuse like a dream, with the emptiness of the eternity.
Great art and moody work.
Congrats, mb

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1171] (7409)
  • [2009-04-27 17:03]

I love the moods you capture in your images, and this one is another excellent example of knowing your style and working it well:) Good use of contrast, light, and blur to create a memorable look. It might be good to tip it slightly to make the prominent electric pole look vertically straight, but not a serious issue. Beautifully done!

Uffff, kao i obicno! :-)

Tvoj rad Jozef, mogu da primetim gledajuci 1000 fotki u kolazu. Prvo zato sto ima neprikosnovenu atmosferu i drugo zato sto ima uvek jaku pricu. Iako si ovoga puta koristio i novi efekat za svoje radove, koji inace odlicno ide uz ovakvu kompoziciju, opet si zadrzao ono "svoje" po cemu si prepoznatljiv i zbog cega sam od pocetka uzivao u svakom tvom perfektnom radu!

Puno pozdrava druze!
David

Special, deserted atmosphere...I like it very much.


TFS,

Nath

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2009-05-23 16:08]

You've done some really amazing work, I have enjoyed your gallery very much. MOODY!!! Nice lighting, reflections and detail. TFS

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  • S-moon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 80 N: 367] (2291)
  • [2009-05-28 11:19]

Hi Jozef,

Beautiful composition and great PP work. Great mood with very nice colours.
Well done!

TFS Greetings Simone

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