The World Outside My Home

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• tropicalrips (0)
• [2006-01-27 8:19]

the composition is good Maria :)
you hav an eye for textures, i like the textures on the wall and the window frame
good title for the image :)

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• iliannak (3480)
• [2006-01-27 8:20]

wow ... the details on the window and the wall are amazing :o) great textures :o)
as to the roof ... i can't give advice on avoiding the mess ... ;o)
TFS it Marija
ili :o)

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• SkyF (6138)
• [2006-01-27 8:41]

Great colors and details. Very nice compostion. Wonderful notes you added.
SkyF

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• clix_stuff (2303)
• [2006-01-27 8:41]
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Hey Marija,
How you doing? Been a while, got bogged down among otehr things. I wanted to try a theme on doors and windows. Now I guess I better not.:) I like this composition its got nice understated colours, shapes and is very graphic. TFS
Catch you soon. Regards

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• Germaine (115)
• [2006-01-27 9:05]

Good colors and textures. I like the way you got part of the roofline and the sky.

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• jcandeli (3985)
• [2006-01-27 9:28]
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see?! There are cool things to photo right in your backyard! I told you! :P
Great, simple photo. The colors and textures are great. Composition is good too. I don't know why the top of the roof is a little blurry but it kind of works! Just don't get arrested for taking photos into other people's bedrooms! ;)
Nice job. JP

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• degetica (2785)
• [2006-01-27 9:30]

indeed, the textures are great, Marija.
I can't wait for the next one in the series, seems you found the paradise for old walls, houses and windows.

Compliments, Sabina

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• ropetko (0)
• [2006-01-27 9:47]

Nice colors and excellent composition! Too bad the roof line is messed up, but you've judged yourself in the note so it's forgiven ;)
Colors and details are great! I suppose you adjusted the perspective in PP, so the results are really great, congratulations!
Čitamo se,
Petko

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• ZorroII (0)
• [2006-01-27 9:50]
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Mathematical composition with a textural, warm colorful subject. Balanced composition and 3 matching colors. Simple in look but no so simple in terms of technique.

Marija, you are one of a kind in many aspects.

Ben.

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• salil (2106)
• [2006-01-27 11:23]

The texture on the wall and the window complement each other. Very good composition in an understated way.
Salil

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• dalia (608)
• [2006-01-27 11:32]

Hi Marija,
Very nice window, so precisely framed.
Dalia

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2006-01-27 19:09]
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Very nicely done, Marija. Superbe composition with the diagonal created by the roof and the other geometrical shapes formed by the windows. Nice texture you have captured on the wall as well. Excellent!

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• gaylen54 (0)
• [2006-01-27 19:28]

Not that you care what I think, with that conversation with Zorro going on ;), but I do like it! It's those colors and textures and character, and red jackets, and oops!!!

Have a good weekend, little 'un.
Gayle :)))

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• dada (6560)
• [2006-01-28 7:01]
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oh, right now I want to take my camera and go on the streets, to find some windows like yours! I love all this, it seems that they have... soul... and this one has also a scarface:))
beautiful, I LOVE THE WINDOWS:))

thanks!
anca

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• Talisman (3231)
• [2006-01-28 7:06]

Salut Marija,

Woderful composition. Strong graphism and colours. Well seen and well taken too!

It's amazing how sometimes everything come together...the compo, framing, colours...and even the caption for u! An inspirational moment of urs. I could feel it when reading ur note.

Also in case I forget...Happy New Year to you! GONG XI FA CAI!! :)

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• kitflorendo (0)
• [2006-01-28 7:39]
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Got here some time ago but, again, real life stepped in so I'm late.
The best parts about this are:
Complementary colours, textures, diagonal of the roofline (even if 'scarred' by some surgery) and the detail IN the window area. Not very exciting, with no Wow Factor, but interesting nevertheless.
You know that I'm not one for Wow! Amazing! etc when I talk to you and you know that I say what I see. So, overall, interesting in its detail, basic composition adherence, dodgy sky? Is that noise or is it very thin clouds? Let's go for the clouds option.
Give us some WOW Factor tomorrow? We know you can do it.

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• lucbus (10261)
• [2006-01-28 8:15]

Superb texture and colors Marija. The sharpness is excellent. Very good composition. TFS
Luc

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• noelshami (2349)
• [2006-01-29 15:46]
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Love the texture on the wall and the window. Colours go well too. i don't know but i think this will look great without the sky...tight crop. This is so well seen.

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• Dawn (17508)
• [2006-02-06 16:10]
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I like these kind of photos Marija, very well done, great colours, textures, and compostion..the roof doesnt look too bad, kinda goes with the photo...
thanks for sharing..
Kind regards
Dawn in New Zealand.

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• Alfonso (3129)
• [2006-02-17 9:06]
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U-u-u!Window!
Prygozhy malyunak!