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Copyright: Marija Gencic (Maria74) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 551 W: 90 N: 630] (5997)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-09
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Pentax Optio 30
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Boy and Girl [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-03-25 8:16
Viewed: 868
Points: 73
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken last September at my friend's place. I really don't like the background, but this picture turned out most spontaneous.

PP: neat imaged before resizing, B&W conversion, added this paper toner, raised contrast slightly.

Have a good weekend!

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To earthmoney: baby-sittingMaria74 6 05-04 15:01
To chiping59: Thanks!Maria74 1 04-14 10:48
To gaylen54: Hi Gayle!!!Maria74 1 03-29 07:36
To pozaru: Hi VladMaria74 1 03-27 16:49
To kedo: your WSMaria74 1 03-27 16:28
To branci: Hi Branci i on:))Maria74 1 03-27 03:39
To kitflorendo: secretsMaria74 1 03-27 03:33
To brashy: thanx!Maria74 2 03-26 05:44
To salil: climbingMaria74 2 03-26 02:49
To Dawn: Hi DawnMaria74 2 03-25 19:07
To ZorroII: Merci BenMaria74 1 03-25 17:55
To Tintin: Merci SuzanneMaria74 2 03-25 11:38
To Mooncake: backgroundMaria74 1 03-25 11:21
To degetica: Hi dear!Maria74 1 03-25 10:49
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beautiful expressions on their faces Maria :)
pure and natural

excellent portrait

IMO, the background is fine: not disturbing, natural looking. However, I think you could have been closer to them; the way it is now, their faces are too close to the top edge. But, you captured their look very naturally, the smile on that little girl, and the sparky eyes of the boy. And that, in a way, it not always easy to do! TFS!

Lovely picture Marija. Black and white works well, background not a problem.
Hope your weekend is good.
best wishes
Rob

Hi Marija,
Just as you've said, the smiles on their faces are so spontaneous and uncontrived. Such great facial expressions deserves a little enhancement by doing a lens blur to the distracting stairway. Do not let the background spoil your well-captured shot.

Nice soft effect

They look so sweet together. Very nice composition and conversion to black and white.

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2006-03-25 9:54]
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Great portrait. Expressions of innocence always appeals to the heart. In a way, the background is quite apposite as it could denote the climb through the years to come.
Fine PP idea and execution.
Salil

What a lovely picture!
Your daughter is absolutely gorgeous.
She as the most lovely smile in the world.
"What else can you expect with a mom like Marija,"

Great toning, great expression, great crop, great backdrop.


You’re the best!

A good weekend to you to Marija.

Very nice effect Maria.
Well done
Selamlar
Hakan

Superb!!!!!!!
she glows with frienship;-)

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2006-03-25 10:49]

The background is fine; not disturbing.They look so sweet together.
Mitra

Lovely shot, Marija ! The background is not bad at all. Love the happiness of those two kids !

Marleen
sorry out of greens today

Beautiful picture of these lovely children, Marija. I am guessing that the girl is Nadia because she looks very much like you (at least from the various pictures I have seen of you as we have never met in person!!!). Very nice expression you have captured and as usual you are too hard on yourself and the background is not disturbing at all. I might have liked to see the top of their heads but it still works fine as is. The kids are just so happy that it is a pleasure to watch. Good PP treatment as well. Excellent!

thanks maria for this happy moment :) fresh and lovely, they´re both so cute!the bw is a really good choice and the back ground doesn´t disturb at all :)

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1139 W: 100 N: 3357] (17508)
  • [2006-03-25 14:55]
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What a lovely photo Marija..such beautiful children...you have captured this photo well..Spontaneous ones are so precious.. and really I like the background..even though the roughness of the concrete shows through.. it is natural.. and thats the nice thing about the whole photo. thanks for sharing..
Regards
Dawn.

What a wonderful portrait Marija, they look both so kind. Why you not happy with the results. It seems to me a spontanious photo and your after work gives a nice dreamy effect.
Have a wonderful weekend Marija,

Johannes

This one is definitively for the album...one moment to cherish forever. Love the quality of this photo. The clarity and the sharpness is so good. And i think that background fits well. Keep it up. Neat work.

Hi Marija
What a lovely shot. The kids look very cool. TFS.
Peace,
Mohammad

Hello Marija,

Very good spontaneous capture, well suited to the B&W medium, the BG is fine, these are two cute, smiley children. I like the wide white framing you have chosen, well done.

Kindest regards
Wayne

Marija,
A very pleasant double portrait!
Lovely poses of happy children, what more can one wish for this Sunday morning...
The back is not disturbing at all, as it is I think it adds to the improvised feeling of the capture and thus is an important part
Regards,
Pablo -

This is a timeless classic.
The children are natural and the smiles are so genuine. You must have said something magical. What's the secret?
Your treatment is also very pleasnt, soft and tonal. Another secret? paper toner? Wotsat?
Background? Where? The strength of the subjects is enough to swallow the b/g.

hi maria! how are you my fiend?
very very sugar childs,
regards.
serdar

Beautiful portrait Marija, Everthying is great here.. the lighting, the sharpness, the choice of B&W, the focus on the eyes.

Bravo!

See you on TL, Marie-José

Beautiful portrait, nice expression... Brava!

Beautfiul image Maria. I like the tight crop and the image has such a soft, innocent, happy quality to it. You should be proud of this shot.

Joe

Cute shot. This is your little girl on the right, right? :)
I think you did too uch work with neat image, their skin is too "flat" and too soft, and that's something you shouldn't do with kids skin. Still I find it nice, this polaroid frame makes it look more 80's :)
Čitamo se, pozdrav!
Branka i on.

Lovely spontaniety. You caught their expressions so well. A very good choice of the tones as well. Well done Maria!

Wonderful double portrait, Marija !!!
Lovely and joyful.


tfs and have a sunny week,
vlad

Hello. Nice facial expressions. They seems happy, that´s important! Good catch. Be safe. :O)

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  • laine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 376 W: 37 N: 106] (877)
  • [2006-03-28 7:01]

A very beautiful shot, Marija!
Love the B&W, the softness of the photo and the joy those two little friends have is so natural!
Great shot!
TFS!
Laine

Nadia is growing!!! She looks just like her mom! They have a nice glow about them, Marija, and their expressions are so happy - a very nice moment you captured here, and there's NOTHING wrong with the background.

Congratulations on your 2nd place finish! I was so excited...!!
Love you,
Gayle :)

What a lovely and warm and clear shot, Maria. Good sharpness too. well done and I like it.

Best regards,

Don

Zdravo
Kakose ? :))
I like your Turkish too and also the photo.. but it should be better Black frame with white borders.. any way beatiful photo.. have a nice day
Prietno...

Hello.
It is a lovely work.
I like the soft touch,the choice of B/W,the cropping and of course their wonderful eyes and smiles.
Great capture and well presented.
Regards, FRANCESCO

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-04-02 8:51]

beautiful double portrait... children are always so beautiful... I love the way you expressed the purity by the glow... great, like a memory from the childhood;)

tfs
anca

Wow! what are lovely kids!Sweet smiles!Very impressive moment!Well done!
Regards,
chiping

Maria,
Great photo. I would like to see the original. Although I like the effects I really like to see detail, too. They are VERY cute. I like the contrast between the background and the perfect children. Well done.
keep shooting,
Aaron

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  • Sans1 Gold Star Critiquer [C: 463 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-04-24 21:10]

HI Marija-what a great portrait of these two wonderful children- I love the soft tones and the BW- one of the most beautiful portraits I've ever seen! Wonderful work!

Best wishes,
Steve

marija... if one one this is ur baby....ill babysit..and since ur the mom...i culd do it for free.... honestly....the 1st time i saw this portrait after i saw ur pic...the girl reminds me of u...how cute u are wen ur a kid...... thats how i c that...but then..thats only my story...

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  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1060 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2006-05-03 16:48]

Beautiful...
Tomasz

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