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Oblivious


Oblivious
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Copyright: Aleksandar Matkovic (sasa) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 35 W: 13 N: 46] (510)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-18
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon PowerShot A85, Canon 5.4-16.2mm 1:2.8-4.8, Kingston CF 256MB
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Sunsets (sasa) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-09-24 8:42
Viewed: 524
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Oblivious
 
A man oblivious of the sunset leaving the scene to the left...
 
Pp work:
First some curves fix, than some additional saturation on the upper clouds, than some desaturation of the entire shot, than highlight dodge on the ground level, and some extra on that pedestrian. Than duplicated the layer and on duplicate (60% visible) added lots of noise removing stuff. Than deleted parts of the layer that should be sharp. In the end framed and balanced color tones a bit more.
Original is in workshop!
 
Shot was taken on path near river Sava , just under the Kalemegdan fortress.
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  • Great 
  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5672 W: 197 N: 2400] (9463)
  • [2006-09-24 10:07]

Beautiful shot, I like the composition
I like sunbeams crossing
the clouds, very beautiful and lukewarm picture.
Congratulations for the beautiful look!

Sérgio

  • Great 
  • Rob Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 194 W: 5 N: 14] (1466)
  • [2006-09-24 14:30]

Hi Aleksandar, excellent shot, great rays of light bursting through. :)

Really attention grabbing picture. Normally on TL this would be sunset against silhouettes, but your addition of the row of cars and the walker adds a wonderful level of detail into the picture. Bravo
Thanks for sharing
Mark

Nice done!
Good composition, colors, ...work!

Salute
Iv

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 599 W: 66 N: 31] (5814)
  • [2006-09-25 8:51]

Hm...posle godinu dana stavljas fotku. Zasto?
Super je.
Pozdrav

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-09-25 20:54]
  • [+]

Uh, umalo da te iskritiziram, ono kao zar si i ti poceo sa oblacima i zalascima. Ali deo sa kolima i covekom je stvarno - za svaku cast. Mogu da zamislim sliku u vecoj verziji gde se covek vidi jos bolje. Odlicno, iskreno ti kazem.

A.

Looks like a movie set. The light on the ground is extremaly effective.

Cheers!

Ben

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