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Copyright: Tanja Alma (silycat) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 212 W: 25 N: 136] (2313)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-10-06
Categories: Macro
Camera: Canon PowerShot A710 IS
Exposure: f/4, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Silycat's photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-27 17:40
Viewed: 565
Points: 22
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Miholjsko leto - Djordje Balasevic (find Balasevic on www.youtube.com)

Do pola jedan je bila
na casu klavira
onda korakom merila grad
i usput gledala izloge
pardon, svoj odraz u njima
u kosi jos, poput venca,
ona molska kadenca
mala vracka da upravo tad
uz caffe Kibic polagano
nadodje on, kao plima

Tajne su tu zato
da ih neko nasluti
postoji rec koja vredi
tek kad se odcuti
Bogu je kanuo caj
svud je prsnuo sjaj

Jedan platan ce ostati zlatan
ona kroz smeh cvrsto
svoju kajdanku stisce
ne drhti on, to je samo
to uvelo lisce
blazeno Miholjsko leto
jedno i sveto za njih

A on je nosio naglas
svojih skoro osamnaest
sve cesce mu govore vi
beges u grudima udara
bije u bronzane zice
u dzepu sretni staklenac
ko ono novcic i zdenac
mala vracka da nestanu svi
a ona bane ko lupez
i prospe mu kosu u lice

Tajne su tu zato
da ih neko nasluti
postoji rec koja vredi
tek kad se odcuti
Bogu je kanuo caj
svud je prsnuo sjaj

Kao osrednji klošar
malo prosed i prostar
na uglu sam zastao sam
ne tako dobar oktobar
i misli sve u ruskom štimu
a, onda shvatih, na prepad
da te volim, ko nekad
vreme samo raspiruje plam
u meni miholjsko leto
to prkosno Sunce pred zimu

This is one beautiful balade that father (master of the sad songs and gypsy violins...) made for his daughter it cannot be truly translated but it goes something like this("Miholjsko leto" means that short summer in october last sunny days before the cold)

Till half one she had a piano lesson
and measured the town with her steps,
she looked at the windows -her reflexion in them
while those sad piano notes were still as wind in her hair
and then he came smiling down the street
like a tide...
Secrets are there
just to be flair
there are words more valuable when they are not told,
God spill the tea and the world turn into gold...
She smiles and holds her notebook tight
while he shiwers like the fallen leaves
blessed that holy autumn summer it's just for them
He was almost 18 and not a kid anymore
tunes drumming wild in his chest
yet a lucky glass marble hidden in his pocket as a secret spell to forget the whole world...
but then she came as a thief and poured her hair into his face...
I was standing on a corner alone like an old gray vagabund, in that sad october mood,
and then I suddenly realized - I still love you as before, and time only fires my flame,
in my hart always that "autumn summer" that last stubborn Sun before the cold

you can find Balasevic on www.youtube.com
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Beautiful work with the selective saturation.
Rew

Zdravo Tanja!
Opet jako lepa fotografija staklenca i prikladni stihovi.
Dobro si se setila za youtube!
Svaka cast!
Zorica

Dobro jutro Tanja,
odlican rad, vrlo zanimljivo i jedinstveno.

Igor

WOW Tanja, what striking, beautiful and colorful shot, well done, everything is super perfect, composition, position of view, exposure and creativity, simply brilliant, well done, thanks for sharing it with us and keep them coming, regards, Salas

Pozdrav Tanja,lep i interesantan rad sa divnom pesmom.
Pozdrav.
A.

pozdrav tanja!
odlicna fotka i jako dobar pogled kroz pikulu, odlicne boje.
pozdrav!
zoran

hi tanja, wonderful poem , very heartfelt, nice colors and clarity in this image, interesting details, take care, thanks scott

Ćao, Tanja:)

U principu me oduševljavaju fotke koje u komentaru imaju stihove, naročito domaće. Ali ovaj tvoj rad je vrhunski: odlična fotografija, dobro odabrani i lepi stihovi, a posebno tvoj napor da ih prevedeš, i plus da promovišeš Balaševića. Zaista zaslužuješ sve čestitke:)

Pozdrav, Slavica

PS Mislim da se za Miholjsko leto u engleskom kaže "Indian summer"...

Hi Tanja, lovely composition with splendid reflections, great idea, very well done, have a great sunday, ciao Silvio

Zdravo Tanja
Vrlo lepo i uspesno...
Pozdrav,Braca

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 325 W: 2 N: 43] (2855)
  • [2007-10-30 16:23]

Zdravo Tanja.Izvanredno uspelo makro.
Pozdrav, Bosko.

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2094 W: 59 N: 2676] (14733)
  • [2007-12-05 8:58]

Hi Tanja...
Rodjena si za izmisljanje objekta i story!
Vrlo lepa ideja, rad, boje i prezentacija...
Cestitam, George

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