No.97

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• Frenchy (1454)
• [2005-06-11 21:27]
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Nice geometry. I like the color and your composition. Good job.

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• jbate (0)
• [2005-06-11 23:52]
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This is a very good photograph, and it is very interesting. The dynamic colours are dramatic and the composition is also good. I also like the detail, the clarity and the textures. One thing you must be careful of: large, bright area tend to attract the eyes away from the main subject, in this case, the bench. You might consider darkening the white area to the right. I do not feel right about making a workshop of the photographs of others. Most of all, keep in mind that what I say is just my opinion. Great job.

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• tanbinh (3156)
• [2005-06-12 4:55]
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belle composition de la photo!
good shot!
bye....tanbinh.

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• maleentjeh (92)
• [2005-06-12 5:13]
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Wonderful shot of this abandoned house.

Well done,

Marleen

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• ruudblok (22815)
• [2005-06-12 7:14]
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• SylFondacci (14137)
• [2005-06-12 7:18]
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Beautiful shot, Marija !
Nice colours and compostion. You should have posted it in bigger size, maybe, IMHO.
Sylvie

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• rghattam (980)
• [2005-06-13 10:36]

Nice shot. Lovely colors. Looks like something out of an art project, not an abandoned house. Nice lines all over, sharp edged objects everywhere, very nice composition. I like the fact that everything in the shot looks a bit rustic and old except for the number board. The white wall on the right is a tiny bit of a distraction. Over all it's an excellent shot, but one little thing though why such a small shot? How come you did not use the whole 800/800 available?
Great work! TFS.

Ravi.

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• linus (11331)
• [2005-06-13 11:52]

Hi Marija,

I really like this photo. Very nice colours and the sense of geometry is pretty neat.

Well done.

Sunil

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• tournesol (12864)
• [2005-06-13 19:37]
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Yes, I would appreciate this image more if it were a bit bigger. But since I like it anyway, let's go for a critique! I find your picture a good example of a well-balanced composition, specially the red vertical pipe and the horizontal green bench. I don't mind the white wall; it's part of the set and I don't find it distracting. All in all, an excellent capture!

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• calamaro (857)
• [2005-06-14 8:12]

great shot, what a wonderful place, thanks to let us see it

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• yerevantsi (847)
• [2005-06-15 3:36]

I like the comopsition. Its content is anything but simple to me.
The colors are great too.
You have a nice eye, Marija! Congratulations!
Garo

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• artabb (3116)
• [2005-06-16 5:59]

Marija, Very nice shot. It conveys a cheerful sadness...
Arturo

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• paolino (281)
• [2005-06-22 16:47]

Your choise was correct, Marija, colors are amazing in this picture. I don't know the original one, but I'm not sure that the grain you added was a good choise.
Anyway I like the final effect of your work.
Take care
Paolo

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• harpya (12696)
• [2005-07-01 22:19]

I liked this photo Marija, very pretty,
the tones in green calls the attention the eyes, I believe that she does not have nobody that pass and does not look at ploughs this bank. You have much creativity and are very sensivel in catching certain details. Congratulation for this.

Sergio

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• Murmeli (394)
• [2005-08-13 15:25]

J'aime bien ce genre de photo. dommage que l'on ne puisse pas l'admirer en plus grand.

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• davey590 (1294)
• [2005-10-04 17:29]

like the composition and colours in this shot
nice one
pity you resized it small
TFS
Dave R

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• rogeriobuso (2)
• [2005-11-02 8:21]

Very simple and beautiful at the same time. Nice colors and texture.

The 97 sign reminds me the Jardim Botanico street sign. lol.

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• dalia (608)
• [2005-12-30 14:15]

Hi Marija,
I like very much your picture, it's so colored and so simple, something perfect in my opinion!
Dalia

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• pranab (3141)
• [2006-04-19 3:49]
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marija,
#97 has lost the occupants but not the grace of the past. good observation and captuer of the colors. nice composition.

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• cleopatra (1152)
• [2006-05-04 18:43]
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Beautiful colors extravaganza Marija. Very well composed image. I love it!

Réal

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• joeturner (135)
• [2006-06-08 6:50]
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I like the comosition of this image, it works well but i think that the left hand side wall is overexposed slightly!

Love the composition though

Joe