Just a perfect sommer day 2

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• burak28 (15981)
• [2009-09-29 22:39]

Good morning Bratislav
Such a nice children
POV, timing and clarity are excellent
Great mood and atmosphere
Thanks
Burak

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• jone (28686)
• [2009-09-30 0:00]

ZDravo decoooo ;)))
Zhivi, zdravi, veseli kroz ceo zhivot...
Pozdrav druzhe...
J ;)

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• taftabit (4784)
• [2009-09-30 10:39]

xaxaxaxaxax odlicna fotka prijatelju
bas si ih poredjao kao u apoteci :))
najmanji je sigurno i najbesniji :))
pozdrav i nek su svi zivi i zdravi
pozdrav
T

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• nicou (20094)
• [2009-10-01 2:27]

Hello,

Géniale image, la diagonale de grandeur, de jeune qui sont en oie, superbe portrait, amngigique.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

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• Silvio2006 (42499)
• [2009-10-01 6:24]

Ciao Braca, great diagonal with cute models, splendid expression, lovely compopsition, very well done my friend, ciao Silvio

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• mikolaj_cava (29250)
• [2009-10-05 2:36]

Hello Bratislav! Very nice children, very funny scene. Good shot. Well done!

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• ScottHale (136)
• [2009-10-07 18:31]
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bratislav,
Have you any particular requests for feedback?
I'd say the subjects of the photo are cute and I'll give you that but the technicalities of this photo remind me of when my mother used to grab the camera and make us line up in a pose. She'd cut our heads off or one of us would be split in half. This isn't "quite" that bad but it surely could be composed better. I also think you could have easily gotten more of these guys' bodies in the photo and a much better photo by getting down to their level by squatting down a little. This is such a "snapshot" quality photo.
The lack of descriptive notes does not allow the viewer to know what your intentions are by this photo.
Of course, most of the people above have said their "lovely composition's" and "nice POV's" and I struggle to find any truth in their words....
The composition is poor as is the POV.
Do the people think they are helping you by telling you all this?
Scott

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• AleksaSrbin (17721)
• [2009-10-07 23:44]

He ala si ih naredjao!Divna je Braconi!Veliki pozdrav!
A.

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• WhiteKnight (7499)
• [2009-10-11 7:02]
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Hi Bratislav

I think Scott's made some very valid photographic comments in his critique.

I like the idea you're portraying here - but how about showing the entire children - the legs just look cut off to me. Maybe you could try a plain BG in your house and experiment with different lighting?
As to this shot the colours look a little washed out and could do with more saturation pp. Also more contrast would help.

Rgds
DAvid