Rule of Thirds

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• delnaja (0)
• [2005-12-03 13:32]

Hi Marija!
beautiful work you did here!!! :)
Congrats
Fred

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• emanuela (1013)
• [2005-12-03 13:41]

absolutly abstract,well post processed, great control of light and colors, i think a real artwork for poster
take care
e

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• pathy (1734)
• [2005-12-03 13:46]

tres beau travail ! felicitations !

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• reddevil (0)
• [2005-12-03 13:50]

This is really great Marija....I look to it for more than one minute...thats long ;-) and I think this is a real masterpiece from you and this will be a favorite.
Have a wonderful weekend you and your daughter.

Take care,

Jos

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• metall (2958)
• [2005-12-03 14:03]

This is perfect. and 100% agree about studio works, But you did it very well.

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• btokaz (5744)
• [2005-12-03 14:23]

Very abstract and very interesting work Marija...
Tomasz

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• pablominto (27446)
• [2005-12-03 14:27]

Hi Marija,
Nice experiment! Simplicity can sometimes be very intriguing... Besides - great composition, textures and definition... What more to ask for??
Regards,
Pablo -

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• wishnugaruda (15144)
• [2005-12-03 14:58]

Hi Marija,
you are very creative and full of fantasie, I like that. Your post is abstract and would be a wonderful poster in my living-room.
Thank you very much, this is why I like TL for, no more boring shots please!!!
Have a wonderful sunday, bye
Sabine - wishnguaruda

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2005-12-03 16:51]

Time well spent, Marija, on creating a very nice piece of abstract art. I like the touch of red of the ball and its reflection and the one flat chessboard and the other waving as if it was disintegrating or being part of a parallel universe. On the right side, you have a few square of white where the lines are not quite white as the black seems to have bled into it. Very good expermiment. Well done!!!

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• samr (3323)
• [2005-12-03 18:04]

Hi Marija, I like the idea, it is NOT a lousy experiment, it is not an amateurish one either, and you seriously under rate yourself. This is great experimentation and results - very artistic and attractive.
Sam

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• Shutter2Think (0)
• [2005-12-03 21:30]
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• nova (8653)
• [2005-12-03 22:23]

Hello,Marija! This is a very nice experimental work! Great concept and beautiful composition! There is a lack of definition in the curve lines of the left chess board but the result is still very interesting! Well done! Michel

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• Beger (19960)
• [2005-12-03 22:34]

Beautiful creative work Marija ! With the checkerwork of right-hand side, your composition becomes very animated. I would say notes of piano start to dance and the red ball seems very tried to pass on other side. Do not say that it is a lousy experiment. The challenge is taken up like a Master. Very well done. Annie

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• Werewolf (26142)
• [2005-12-03 22:46]

Great experience! I like that... Just a few alements and have the feeling to see the visual of some old demo pf graphic performance on computurs. On time of the 486 computu it was very popular! :)

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• wck (3843)
• [2005-12-04 3:39]

Hi Marija, Indeed! Rule of Thirds! Well done!

Wong

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• neverlandkids (2319)
• [2005-12-04 4:55]

This is very striking. The composition and colours are wonderful! Very creative.

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• cloverstar (0)
• [2005-12-04 5:33]

This is a great entry for the contrast hunt. Love the board you used and the one red toy. Very good work.

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• kitflorendo (0)
• [2005-12-04 6:01]

Very 1960's. Mary Quant would have approved.
I was hanging back until I had a fresh stock of medals. No technical words of praise - it's all been said above and you KNOW why it's good.

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• stecotdon (4883)
• [2005-12-04 6:06]

This is amazing Marija,
Graphics are great and the red ball is "the icing of the cake" :))
Very creative and very well executed.

Excellent experiment! Very well done!

take care, Stef :))

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• OtObOx (508)
• [2005-12-04 13:11]

Hello Marija,

Nice graphic picture again ! The waves are brocken the image: well done.
The only negative thing I can say is the little ball I find too much blur.
Anyway, good picture !

Jean-Marc

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• niner (2068)
• [2005-12-04 16:58]

Hi Marija!
Amateurish or not, it turnd out very interesting!

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• sasa (510)
• [2005-12-04 17:07]

Wow, great post-processing!
It totally looks like a 3D Studio Max render,
Very graphical shot.

Pozdrav, Sasa

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• eliferen (3644)
• [2005-12-05 3:44]

Great experimental work. I like the result so much, very creative with all elements..
Elif

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• jcandeli (3985)
• [2005-12-05 8:24]

That is very cool. Nic eexperimenting! :) The polaroid style frame is interesting although I am not sure there was supposed to be text or something filling that empty space at the bottom.

It is simplicity at it's best. I like that you made the left side different than the right side. I would probably like it even if it wasn't differnt. Nice experiment! Keep it up. :) JP

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• lucbus (10319)
• [2005-12-06 19:57]

Excellent experiment Marija hich respect the rule with great contrast and colors. Well done
Luc

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• gaylen54 (0)
• [2005-12-06 23:11]

Lousy?! I don't think so. ;) Love your creativity here, as well as your vision! Poor broken, forgotten toy. It has earned a place in history now!

I love it!
Gayle :)

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• dgusatto (1239)
• [2005-12-07 9:43]

Hi Marija,
beautiful work , i like abstract and modern artwork . Cool effect.

Denis

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• twin (7348)
• [2005-12-07 12:16]

Creative work you have done here...
and a wonderfull composition...
very well done Marija...
congratulations...

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• paul_bk (0)
• [2005-12-07 14:50]

here you were very creative,I like creativity, so I like it a lot......... but why that title? it dpesn't seem to respect the rule of the thirds... at least to my eyes......

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• ballyna (1914)
• [2005-12-07 18:22]

marija,
I liked the idea here,and your PP work is very nice.a very creative and well balanced with the left side curves ,
regards

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• harpya (10106)
• [2005-12-08 11:11]

Great work here Marija
he has his style, strong and delicate
good taste in the colors and details
Congratulations, great job!

Sérgio

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• Eden (2084)
• [2005-12-08 11:44]

Wow Maria, simply superb and believe me, it does not look like an amateurish experiment at all, its brilliant and shows alot of creativity...great job & TFS..martha

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• magda_indigo (31247)
• [2005-12-12 9:49]
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY MARIA, MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM (*_*)

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• spike1 (4321)
• [2005-12-16 1:04]

Great image Marija! It certainly doesn't seem to be an amateurish result - congrats on your work, and thanks for the informative note.

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• cstathoulis (13323)
• [2005-12-19 10:47]

WOW...!
Beautiful abstract work!
Another great way of displaying "The rule of 1/3rds"
Well done :)

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• DarkoG (1016)
• [2005-12-20 18:48]

Bok MArija
Nakon čitanja svih komentara nema se što posebno dodati. Usprkos, kako sama kažeš "mnogo tehničkih grešaka" (a i nema ih tako mnogo) napravila si odličnu fotku.
ČEstitke
Darko

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• Yug (1864)
• [2005-12-23 11:03]

Hi Marija, good work and good compo. Opposition of B&W and colour well chosen!
Happy Holidays!
Guy

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• salil (2106)
• [2005-12-29 13:18]

The title could be anything, yet the image would have been a great one. You have done excellent PP, butwhat is more important is the imaginative visualization.
Great photograph, Marija.
Salil

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• marjan (788)
• [2005-12-31 11:17]

Marija, raj experiment ti je dobro uspeo. Interesantne površine koje kao da se ukrivljuju u nevidljivoj barijeri.
Lepo ;-)
Marjan

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• DAM (1110)
• [2006-01-26 14:23]

This one really blew me away.... your post process is outstanding. I really like the idea. Well done.

DAM

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• Karey (775)
• [2006-03-07 17:05]
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Hi Marija,

A great experiment, with interesting PP. This image works for me. Very interesting. The only suggestion I would have is that the red ball is a powerful focus in this image, maybe a slightly higher angle with the ball backlit with a white square would have added to the dramatic effect??? Just an idea. Well done, cheers Karey.

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• sierra (0)
• [2006-07-13 3:26]

Puro arte gráfico ¡mis felicitaciones!