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my father


my father
Photo Information
Copyright: Dominika Karkika (karkika) (16)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-07-01
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Olympus SP-510 UZ
Exposure: f/3.3, 1/30 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-21 1:07
Viewed: 547
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
... hot summer day...working in garden-my father was really tired
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Welcome to TL!
Great first picture! Nice mood and lighting.
maybe a little too centered but, still good.
well done,
Shelby

Welcome to TL !

I'm not a big fan of centered compos but your first photo here is great.

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 588 W: 165 N: 1406] (10181)
  • [2007-08-22 1:41]

Hi Dominika,
First of all, welcome to TrekLens, I'm sure you will enjoy it, but be warned, it's addictive.
This is a lovely portrait of your dad, good lighting and good focus. Personally I would crop a little off the left hand side.
KInd regards,
Peter.

Hello Dominika!
Very good ,strong portrait.well captured,good tones and B&W idea,
Cheers.
Cezar

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