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The New Day
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Copyright: Jitka Patakova (jityna) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 146 W: 7 N: 166] (1083)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-18
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Friends/Family
Camera: olympus c-745uz
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Sunsets, Sunrise [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-04-23 7:11
Viewed: 772
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One of my beautiful moments in my life....

Sunrise
There is no painting
Greater
Than the masterpiece of the morning sky.

The brush strokes splash across the canvas of day
In luminescent color
Crimson, amber, violet and gold
On a clean background of impetuous mountains.

With each rising sun
Life awakens, hope beckons
The darkness is rolled away.

(Inspired by Laurence Overmire)

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It's really one of the nicest moments.
Thank you for sharing
bye Aga

great colours and contrast, i also liked the framing.
paulo

Hi, the poem says it all! Beautiful scenery and colours. TFS, Jean

great impression
Karl

Hi Jitka,
Impressive shot. I like the colors and the mood you have accomplished. Dark giving way to light. TFS
Jim

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  • jitro Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 94 W: 0 N: 40] (528)
  • [2007-04-23 8:54]

Ahoj,
Super barvy, kontrast a rámeček. Ty dvě postavičky mi připomínají jak jsme protihorám maličcí.
Škoda, že jsem tohle svítání prospala. Díky za fotodokumentaci.
Jitka

Hi Jitka,
Thank you for sharing this beautiful image. The colors and framing look great.
Nice job.
Leanne

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  • kitka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 70 N: 223] (2180)
  • [2007-04-23 12:21]

Hi Jity, this is great moody picture...
These were so great days. And in this morning was one of the most greatest sunrises I have ever seen.
That is the reason why we are taking the photos: after many days, months or years they bring us days, months or years back to the moment which was important or strong or whatever...
This morning ment a lot for me. As well as many morning after and before, but I cas see it, I can live it again thanks to this picture.
But let stop my sentimentality:-)
Excellent colours, I am surprised, how many violet you caught. Long frame up and down match well. Bravo, Jity!
Thank you.
Katerina

Hi Jitka,
Woooooooowww!!A superb sunrise shot.İmpressive colours and silhouettes.Well captured.TFS.
Pozdrav!

hAyAti

Hi Jitka, wonderful catch of this light! There are just soo many angles and lights, it's almost endless. TFS.

WHat a postcard!
Very nice compo with extraordinary colours and great framing. TFS Thomas

hi jitka, this is a wonderful capture, really nice composition and excellent colors, great work and thanks for your comments on my work, cheers, scott

Fantastic silhouetted look against this exciting morning light. The rock shapes are nicely rugged and the figures give us a sense of scale. The white border lines add a wonderful wide look for a feeling of being right up there among the clouds and high enough for a far-reaching panoramic view just over the horizon. Ahhh...delightful:)

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  • strom Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 81 W: 3 N: 75] (395)
  • [2007-04-24 22:31]

Hi Jity,
wonderfull atmosphere, colors and drama in the sky. The 3D enhanced by the 3 main panoramas and the 3 more further up to the horizon. Everything accented by the people in the forefront.
Petr

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 26 N: 681] (7565)
  • [2007-04-25 13:13]

And you captured this moment beautiful as it was. Like a romantic painting (let's say Caspar David Friedrich).
Well done!
Tibi

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  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 39 N: 196] (3625)
  • [2007-04-26 4:02]

nice photo jityna. love the colours of the horizon here! nice silhouettes too!

tfs,
tet

Hi Jitka.
Very nice view,great colours and capture.Nice POV.Well done.
Best Rgards
TFS

* Piotr *

Beautiful colors and silhouettes. Nice light.
well done,
Shelby

Hello Jitka!
Fantastic colours and light!
Great composition!
Excellent done!
Lili

Hello Jitka,
I wish I were there now watching this beautiful sunrise. I love backlit photos and this oen is very impressive. Well done.
fusun

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 106 N: 564] (9598)
  • [2007-04-30 19:34]

Great colours nice pic

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2007-05-29 16:46]

Wonderful work, seriously, emotive and evocative. Soft mood of sunrising optimism. Your best!

A.

Hi Jitka,

I stumbled across this site while doing some web surfing. What a great shot! Beautiful composition. I am honored that my poem was an inspiration to you. It's amazing how artists influence each other in so many different ways. No matter what the medium we choose in which to express ourselves, we have a common bond, a common language and a special appreciation of life in all its manifestations.

Here's the poem in its original form:

Sunrise
(by Laurence Overmire)

There is no painting
Greater
Than the masterpiece of the morning sky.

The brushstrokes splash across the canvas of day
In luminescent color
Crimson, amber, violet and gold
On a pure, clean background of impetuous blue.

With each rising sun
Life awakens, hope beckons
The darkness is rolled away.


Best regards,
Laurence Overmire
Poet, USA
http://overmirepoetry.home.comcast.net/

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