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Photo Information
Copyright: Denis Cemazar (danzi) (73)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05
Categories: Nature
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-19 7:10
Viewed: 603
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Flower detail.

Hope you like it. Comments and critques are appreciated.


*Denis
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I do like it. The colour, the clarity, the composition, the frame ... all good.
I don't care too much for heavy ident, even in the frame. It detracts and distracts. The eye is drawn to it and, here, the image must be the star, the centre of attention.
If you put your finger over it right now on your screen, you should be able to see that it is better without it OR much more subdued. As it is, your orange hairy thing leads our eyes directly to it.
Oooops - a flood of honesty again. But am I right or am I right?
Full marks for the image, though.
Welcome to the very strange world of TrekLens.

Welcome to TrekLens!

A great image to begin with! Simple pleasing colors, a lovely subject.

I don't think there would be a thing I would do differently. My only request would be to post your EXIF data. I enjoy seeing what settings people took shots at. A bit more detailed note would be appreciated to!

Welcome aboard!

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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 381 W: 3 N: 21] (1350)
  • [2006-01-19 7:48]

very nice macro denis.
welcome on TL

Hi Denis.
Welcome to TL.
Very nice macro. Great details and sharpnes, but beautiful colors to...
Tomasz

Initially I thought it was a sea urchin. Very nice detail with good DOF and colors. Welcome to TL.

Great macro! I love the orange color and the tones. Congrats!
Elif

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2006-02-10 10:04]

Welcome to TrekLens!A great image to begin with.very nice macro.
Mitra

Very nice and funny !
Thanks you for sharing !
Kisanlov
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