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Copyright: Jerica Herman (jorgi) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 38 N: 33] (519)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-28
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D-70s
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-01-11 1:57
Viewed: 579
Favorites: 6 [view]
Points: 74
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Peak: "Pssst...hey you!"
Moon: "Who? Me?"
Peak: "Well, do you see anybody else up there..."
Moon: "Oh..."
Peak: "You busy?"
Moon: "Actually I was just leaving."
Peak: "Oh..."
Moon: "Why do you ask?"
Peak: "No one is here. I could use some company."
Moon: "I'm sorry but the sky is getting brighter with every minute."
Peak: "But that is a good thing, isn't it?"
Moon: "Not for me. I come and go with the night."
Peak: "Oh... Will You be back tommorrow?"
Moon: "I guess..."
Peak: "So maybe we can make each other company while everybody sleeps."
Moon: "Yes, that would be nice."
Peak: "Great! I will be waiting for you than. Right here."
Moon: "Have to go now....bye"
Peak: "Bye..."



Peak: "I miss you already...and you have no clue..."

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Hi Jeri,
Wow, this is a fantastic scene from the Slovenian mountains, I really like the exposition of the snowy peaks and the Moon in the corner. The purplish olour of the sky is great. Thanks for the humorous note, no.1 presentation! Congratulations, TFS!
Best regards,
Kristof

Živjo Jeri,

ura je sicer že 11.16 ampak meni se še vedno ni uspelo zbuditi. Ležim v postelji, laptop na kolenih in gledam slikice...

...in tale tvoja slikica je prava umetnina. Resno...minimalističen pristop se vedno obrestuje. Manj je več... WOW, Slovenske gore so zares lepe. Še dobro, da obstajajo fotografije - kot tale tvoja - ki nas spomnijo na lepoto, ki jo premore mat' kurja.

Odlična kompozicija in obdelava...še najbolj pa mi je všeč note.

Lepo nedeljo ti želim,

Staša

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  • Dai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 121 W: 54 N: 115] (761)
  • [2009-01-11 2:34]

Hi Jeri, lovely photograph and a great conversation in the notes section.
TFS
Dai

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  • Nushy Gold Star Critiquer [C: 145 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2009-01-11 2:49]

Zdaj moram pa še jaz svoj 'pisk'rček' zraven pristaviti...

Po pravici povedano, ko gledam tvojo sliko, si zaželim iti v gore, pa čeprav nisem taka velika ljubiteljica hribolazenja. Tale fotka pa mi daje nekakšen navdih, da bi si šla ogledat naše speče lepotice.

Odlična fotografija; kompozicija, barve in celotna predstavitev so fantastične.

Lep nedeljo ti želim, pa kakšno fajn nedeljsko kosilo... ;)

Nuša

my goodness you are a morning person all right! i love the colour of light in your photo- it does change withtime and the season , freat story, too , to accompany the great picture. as usual a multistorey work, full fo meaninog and feeling and of course, technically perfect photo-
good sunday , my friend
hugs
ana

Hello Jeri! Amazing moon, amazing landscape. Wonderful perspective. Excellent composition. Fantastic capture and nice frame. Original picture. Good luck!

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27861)
  • [2009-01-11 5:28]

A masterpiec Jeri ! It's light, Zen, I just love it.

Iso.

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1364 W: 0 N: 1663] (13507)
  • [2009-01-11 5:45]

Keen way of making a landscape with the moon Jeri.

jan

Hi Jery.

Very nice picture. The color of the sky and the details if the white peaks are amazing. I like the composition very much as well as the little dialogue.

Thanks.
Pascal-Eric

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  • Athila Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 169 W: 135 N: 398] (1773)
  • [2009-01-11 10:26]

Hi Jeri,

Nice minimalistic composition. Good details in the mountains, nice tonal variation in the sky. What make that image a success is its simplicity. Nice work and TFS.

Athila

Hi Jeri..great shot...perfect light and composition..nice work.

Roger

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  • mi_per Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 234 W: 30 N: 309] (3311)
  • [2009-01-11 10:46]

Zdravo Jeri
Savrsena fotografija...ostao sam bez reci.
pozdrav
Mitko

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1242 W: 0 N: 2425] (20032)
  • [2009-01-11 10:47]

Hello,

Encore une merveille, quzlle image, ce ciel rosé ave cete mongage est fabuleux, quelle compo, quele recherche du cadrage, grandisoe. fabuleux,

Bravo et amitiué

Nicou

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  • b021 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 88 W: 0 N: 47] (1164)
  • [2009-01-11 13:10]

Hi Jeri,Excellent work !
regards
Branimir

Hey Jeri! You don't only create great images, but nice stories also! Needless to say anything about this pic... just great!
Sotiris

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  • Mravka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 195 W: 0 N: 135] (5278)
  • [2009-01-11 14:03]

zdravo Jeri,
povtorno fantastica kompozicija i note
bravo!
TFS
pozdrav, biljana

Nice shot and wonderful PP work as usual, my friend Jeri.
Also your notes are very original and creative. Great :o)
Surely this picture goes to my favorites!!!!

Cheers,
Bruno

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1620 W: 118 N: 2791] (11262)
  • [2009-01-11 19:07]

Hi Jeri
Wonderful work where the nature wins a fantastic graphic and almost geometric effect. Only a superb POV and an extraordinary sense of composition allows that fantastic effect. Great nature photo and a superb artwork presentation.
Precious note, my congrats
mb

Superb work, Jeri! Image, pp work, presentation, note are all in perfect coordination!
Bravo, you brilliant girl!
Diana

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 81 N: 66] (12018)
  • [2009-01-11 22:48]

dear Jeri,
a nice relationship between the moon and the mountain in the special pink gradation sky.
every viewer may imagine various conversation in this silent space.
in my case,
p: hi, my moon, it is so cold and quiet this morning.
m: yes, and very clear, and calm too.
p: the sky looks pink, is it your color?
m: no... perhaps a present from some tender one.
p: this pink sky makes me feel something romantic,
m: about me, every common blue sky does so...but it is special this morning.
p: the sky shows us blue, yellow, orange, violet and purple colors, every color has each mood, and this pink sky seems to have one expectation of good relationship for us.
m: yes we are so close like this now, our true real space is in our imaginations.
p: to be able to see or not to be able to see, both are superficial?
m: my friend told me that the essence is invisible for the eyes.
P: but we can see the invisible essence in visible scene by imagination.
m: we cannot see the invisible essence in visible scene without imagination.
...
thank you for your excellent image,
Akihisa

Hi Jeri,
waiting..
the very essence of zen..
sorry,21 of us,critiquers have already killed that silent conversation..

with regards,
rmkrshnn.

hi jeri
this conversation reminds me a lot the conversation between the petite prince and the fox...do you remember this story, it's one of my favourites!!!
very poetic landscape, i like the way you placed the mountains in your frame giving more space to the air!!!
bravo my dear friend!!!
greetings from athens, pretty cold today
georgia

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2228 W: 171 N: 0] (28658)
  • [2009-01-12 3:49]

Poooozdrav Jeri ;)))))
verovatno... komentari su suvishni...
BRAVO za fotku i notes...
J ;)

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2009-01-12 5:40]

Yes,

That's the sad thing; missing is so personal and you wish you could tell but then you never do; nice thing the moon will keep its promise and be back; but the others ...

Argiris

Amazing shot with perfect story.i really enjoyed in both:))

warm regards
biljana

What a beautiful scene of the mountains. The colour gives a mysterious touch on your photo!!

Hi Jeri,
you are fantastic, your photos is fantastic, conversation is really fantastic, I'm very proud to comment your masterpieces.
A warm hug my dear friend.

Giorgio

Boa tarde jeri
I don´t see any noise...great!!!
All this make me feelas i was reading again LE Petit Prince. Thanks
Teresat

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2016 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2009-01-13 9:03]

hi Jeri

Very peaceful to just look at this scenery of the mountains at night and the moon high at top right corner without reach...The moon so far away from the earth.

The Chinese legend has it that...QUOTE"The story begins with Chang Er's husband, Hou Yi, an archer and architect of great renown. One day, ten suns appeared in the sky, and the emperor, afraid of the imbalance of yin and yang, ordered Hou Yi to shoot the other nine suns down. Hou Yi obeyed, and his skill was recognized by the Great Goddess. She ordered him to build her a palace out of jade. He did so, and she, greatly impressed and pleased, rewarded him with a pill of immortality. There was one condition upon which he could take this pill; he had to fast and pray for one year. Hou Yi, however, did not get to take the pill, for his curious wife found it hidden in their house, and swallowed it. The Goddess, angry at such foolishness, banned her to the moon forever. It is said that she turned into a three legged toad and lives on the moon with a rabbit that grinds the pill of immortality in a mortar for her." UNQUOTE.

tfs, bill

This is so perfect Jeri. An enchanting composition. Simply loved everything about this post.The deep shades of skies and "the silent converstaion" between the snow-capped peak and moon really ignites the emotions.

Am awestruck with this beauty!
cheers,
Shubhi:)

Hello Jeri.

Excellent picture, nice composition.
Originality.

Regards.
Jose Luis.

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 332 W: 0 N: 222] (1851)
  • [2009-01-29 4:05]

Hi Jeri,

amazing light! I love this shot.

Congratulations,
romeu

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  • rudla Gold Star Critiquer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 7] (2774)
  • [2009-01-30 5:31]

Krasna prica!Svidja mi se kompozicija.Ja bih to u velikom formatu na zid :)
Pozdrav jorgi :)
V

vitaju Jeri!
beautiful shot with fantastic composition!very nice)
ALiaksandr

Very beautiful creation. Good soft colours and nice tones. Good pp work.

Witaj!
Fantastyczny widok!
Dobra ostrosc i piena tonacja koloru!
Wspaniala praca.
Pozdrawiam
Tadeusz

WONDERFUL !

je suis sans voix devant cette superbe vue trčs zen, trčs pure.

BRAVO

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  • kona Gold Star Critiquer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 1] (1258)
  • [2009-04-12 18:21]

A good expression. Good composition. It is a favorite photograph calmly.
Best wishes, kona

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