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The ice cream vendor


The ice cream vendor
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Copyright: Francis Xavier Camilleri (fransx) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 583 W: 56 N: 792] (6966)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-18
Categories: Mood
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikon 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6G ED
Exposure: f/8, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-27 8:28
Viewed: 263
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A gorgious girl was selling ice cream amongst these colorful flowers on a very hot day in June by Lake Bled in Slovenia.
She was so docile and we looked at her as an angel!
She refreshed us!
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very nice colourful shot indeed and well timed with the girl riding bye , well done :)

Bonjour Francis Xavier,

Des couleurs très "criardes", font de ce cliché une photo bien sympathique à regarder, bon POV, la rive au fond ajoute une touche de sérénité, attention quand aux fleurs devant, dont on ne distingue plus très bien l'espèce.
Bon travail

Amicalement

Rémi

Hello, Francis,
A very nice summer day and an ice-cream is so refreshing indeed.
I like how you've captured the ice-cream vendor to suit these lovely garden flowers.
TFS
Valerka:)

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2015 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2009-04-27 9:16]

hi Francis

A lovely capture of the garden flowers and colors to show the girl almost halfway in the frame of crossing the path. This is very high color saturation to the point of slightly over done, IMO. But a fine composition to show the cheerful color of the June afternoon.

tfs, bill

Good combination of colors. Saturation on the red colors are too high.

Ciao Francis Xavier, beautiful composition with fantastic flowers, splendid light and colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • Doudou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 423 W: 2 N: 893] (5821)
  • [2009-04-27 10:58]

Bonjour Francis,

Charmant ce joli cliché aux couleurs vives et alléchantes comme les glaces que nous offre cette charmante demoiselle!!!
Amitiés
Odile

very nice composition and moment.. a little bit over saturation..
TFS-Arfa

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4181 W: 407 N: 6449] (41275)
  • [2009-04-28 4:46]

Hi Francis

Good colour, contrast, & saturation. The only part of the frame, where oversaturation concerns me, is the oval shaped fg section of red flowers. The ice cream vendor makes a good focal point. Excellent sharpness and framing. Tfs!

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  • Margy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 6 N: 227] (2512)
  • [2009-04-28 6:20]

Hi Francis,

An eyecather, the composition is very nice but looking further, the colors are not real to me.
regards, Marga

Very beautiful composition. Light, sharp, colours and framing are perfect.Regards Francis.Gil Veloso

Hi Francis:
Looking through your gallery My eyes got stuck on this wonderful pic,I love the bright colours the almost overexposed light and the ice cream vendor going by, I like the composition here even if the vendor is in the center but in the top third ... A very bright happy summer feeling in this little gem.....Roman
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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 259 W: 20 N: 613] (3005)
  • [2009-05-10 8:22]

Hi Francis,

Wow! beautiful vibrant colors.
Very interesting street photography.
Sharp details and well composed shot.

TFS
Ramon

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