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Across the sea...


Across the sea...
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Copyright: Jerica Herman (jorgi) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 38 N: 33] (519)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-03-02
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D-70s
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-13 0:00
Viewed: 195
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
As far as eyes can see
endless ocean of peaceful serenity
but all he feels is her
somewhere there...
...now completely free...
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  • Great 
  • rudla Gold Star Critiquer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 7] (2772)
  • [2009-06-13 0:26]

Hej Jeri :)
fin minimalizam,odlicna kompozicija i ugodjaj fotografije.Svidja mi se prezentacija.
Jedino mozda kod okvira najprije staviti tanku crnu liniju da se odvoji nebo od bijelog okvira.
Pozdrav,
V

Zivjo Jeri :):):)

lepo te je spet videti tukaj. Sem ze malo pogresala tvoje fotografije. Kako si kaj? Jaz sem z mislimi ze na morju, pred nekaj dnevi pa sem se ravno vrnila iz 'vrocega' kontinenta na drugi strani Mediteranskega morja :)

Super slikica...ce jo opisem s 3 besedami: mojstrsko izpeljan minimalzem. Super!!! Ce se prav spomnim iz TE si arhitektka??? Potem nic cudnega da obvladas stvar! :):):):)

Lep dan ti zelim,

Stasa

Hello Jeri!
Great black/white composition, nice point of view!
Lovely mood!
Beautiful large white frame!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 62 W: 64 N: 57] (697)
  • [2009-06-13 2:40]

hi jeri

simply beautiful. minimalist with impact. i like it and the white frame really works well as lili mentioned.

roald

*just a suggestion, you could have lowered your POV a little bit so the horizon would not be on the same level with the top of the guy's head. nevertheless, still captivating.

  • Great 
  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2015 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2009-06-13 5:10]

hi Jeri

Long long time waiting for your post!

Well I do not want to be this guy, lonely and lost in direction :)

but it makes a fine B&W solitude mood. I like it.

tfs, bill

Witaj!
Piekna czarno-biala kompozycja.
Fantastyczny widok,piekna tonacja,ladne refleksy.
Pozdrawiam i zycze milej niedzieli
Tadeusz

  • Great 
  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 978 W: 79 N: 66] (11750)
  • [2009-06-14 0:41]

dear Jeri,

one poetic shot,
cool and lyric,
every imagination may be included in it.

regards,
Akihisa

  • Great 
  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2205 W: 171 N: 0] (28352)
  • [2009-06-24 23:12]

Zivjo Jeri ;)))))
Odlichna kompozicija...nice mood, TFS
Best wishes,
J ;)))

Excellent point of view and contrast, dear Jeri.
Wonderfully composed and presented picture.
Congratulations and TFS, my friend.

Grande abraço,
Bruno

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