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the Fog
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Copyright: Jerica Herman (jorgi) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 38 N: 33] (519)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-03-02
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D-70s
Exposure: f/20.0, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-16 4:25
Viewed: 414
Favorites: 7 [view]
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sometimes we must get lost to find ourselves...
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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27861)
  • [2008-12-16 4:28]

Only an artist can do that, you did.

Iso.

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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 174 W: 95 N: 264] (2711)
  • [2008-12-16 4:29]
  • [+]

A beautifully presented shot. I'd be interested to know something of how you made it.

Hello Jeri,
This goes now from my favorite, I like this boat so lonely in the middle of the sea and the fog.
Beautiful and very well made picture.
You are great, a huge hello.
Giorgio

Very simple, yet effective picture. I like the colors, mood, and presentation.
Nice one
TFS

Wonderful, Jeri!! Perfect!! Simple and perfect!
Congratulations!!! Congratulations!!!

Abraços,
Bruno

Hello Jeri,

This photograph is AMAZING!!! The coloring as dark as it is, is excellent!! I love the use of placing the boat off center!! Was this a storm photo that you converted to b/w??

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  • roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 64 N: 57] (701)
  • [2008-12-16 6:32]

hi jeri

one of those minimalist with an impact. i like the conversion to B&W + the white frame, makes it more interesting. well seen and presented.

roald

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1242 W: 0 N: 2425] (20032)
  • [2008-12-16 6:58]

Hello,

Cet voilier blanc das cet ensemble est merveilleux, quelle compo, quel effet avec det teinte grises-noires, grandiose.

bravoe t amitié

Nicou

hi jeri
what a beautiful idea and great concept to parallel the human existence with a sail boat!!!
i completely agree with you only...sometimes we must get lost in order to discover what we are really looking for...
have a nice evening!
georgia

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  • rudla Gold Star Critiquer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 7] (2774)
  • [2008-12-16 9:21]

This is so great :) The white spot on darkness,i like it very much.
Pozdrav :)

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  • Nushy Gold Star Critiquer [C: 145 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-12-16 10:33]

Dober večer Jeri,

odlična fotografija. Kaj naj rečem drugega? Minimalistična kompozicija, odličen POV...

B/W je prava odločitev za tole fotografijo. Še bolj poudari osamljenost čolna.

Super citat.

Lep pozdrav,

Nuša

Živjo Jeri,

vidim da so me že vsi prehiteli s komentarji...Kaj naj pa sedaj rečem, ker res nočem ponavljati ostalih. :)

Razmišljam...razmišljam...

Že vem... dajem ti velik :)...Interpretacija je v tvojih rokah ;)

LP,

Staša

immensely dramatic image . the boat looks so lonely and yet the light gives a fantastic message of strenghth and hope
jeri at her best (however ddiffficult it is to grade your shots both here and tee as they are one better than the next
ciao!
a

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1620 W: 118 N: 2791] (11262)
  • [2008-12-16 12:54]

Hi again Jeri
Superb photo, very poetic, very graphic and artistic, with a wonderful monochrome treatment, and a great mood.
Congrats, mb

hey Jery
very interesting composition
real artwork
congratulations
T

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 81 N: 66] (12018)
  • [2008-12-16 16:31]
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dear Jeri,,,
this is a shock...
quite like looking a mind state of a patient,
suffering from anxiety disorder.
the original view may be blue seascape with nice fog and vivid white boat,
but your black and white version is changing not only about colors,
but also about mood and feeling, from common to anxious.
black sea and dark gray fog attack the boat,
those are now swallowing all,
lonely boat is swinging by strange and strong terror...

obviously modern arts are deeply influenced by modern anxiety
that the contemporary world generates,
and those works already the products of morbid hearts.
we can find the classical beauty in those?
disorder is artistic?
but it is obvious that real sensitive spirits are in those.

in my feeling, we may have potential energy to find a room of art,
even in such hardest situation.
many dying artist created excellent works.

sorry, you are OK, and your this shot is not so severe.
but it may stimulate the viewer's heart of anxiety.
thank you, Akihisa

What a wonderful shot. Fantastic capture of an image that reflects a mood. Not much more to say than has already been written. Well done Jeri!

Kind regards,
Jim (points are shut off)

boa tarde Jeri
this is a "borderline" composition.
fantastic to express Lost.
Love it
my regards
teresat

Really successful minimalist approach, Jeri, really well chosen line to accompany it, too, the only observation that I would like to make is that you could've placed the boat in the lower third, but nevertheless you did a great job here, congrats!
Best regards,
Diana

Hey Jeri, nice to see some lovely b&w shots in your gallery.
This is simply fantabulous! And i must say you've well defined the picture through your one line and vice-versa!

Cheer&Smiles,
Shubhi:)

Hi Jeri,

I saw it... and I was stunned.

Beautiful.... no masterful! Composition is perfect and the light on the boat and the darkness of the surrounds is almost unthinkable.

Great work!

TFS

D

Very beautiful creative art work. Nice composition and good light.

hi,

to get lost to find our own self..
quite meaningful,the picture as well as the note..

regards,
rmkrshnn.

what a dramatic scene. a very powerful contrast and well-managed compo. beautiful.
Hugs, S

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