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Copyright: Jean Christophe Jacques (jonathanhart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1766 W: 292 N: 1498] (15795)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-26
Categories: Humorous
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: des Landes à Dubrovnik
Theme(s): >my people photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-10-01 1:57
Viewed: 387
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
just a fun snap, he didn't "posed" too long! even cutting the wings i framed the closest as possible, for some reasons i decided it to avoid other disturbing elements... now i think wider focal length and a crop in PP would have been better (but i often try to make the right framing and don't crop in PP, that's why i can miss... like here). just sharing the fun of the scene
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Hi Jean!
Original scene. Very good composition. Nice lightness. Good contrast. Very interesting take.
Cheers!

Bonjour Jean
Interesting idea and capture
If only, wings did not cropped
Burak

Jean Christophe Hi:
Wonderful artistic composition with amazing clarity of colors and details. Would have liked the entire wind spread to be shown, however, only IMO, and I am no expert by any means.
Congratulations, nicely done.
Larry
USA-tfs

Hi Jean,
Congrats for creative shot and composition.
Wire could be cloned away.
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27941)
  • [2008-10-01 11:30]

Not to be serious............that's fine with me.
Good imagination here, I liked the idea and the tones of the wall is pleasant.

Iso.

I like the fun element here - nice bit of creativity. Like you though I'm unsure about the overall composition, as I feel that the wings seem heavily constrained by their proximity to the sides of the picture.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

Hi Jean,
Very creative picture good idea and composition.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2008-10-02 0:48]

bonjour JC

Very interesting catchy pose and title for this action shot. If only the black line is not along the wall and the hooks can be hidden, then the bird may look real.

A good actor in red. tfs

bill

p/s wings cropped, you say? yes, just slightly

Salut JC

Bien vu et plein d'humour.
J'adore cette vision des choses.
Belles couleurs.

Amicalement
Daisy

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