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Triana pura


Triana pura
Photo Information
Copyright: anaykike valencia (anaykike) (113)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-16
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Windows [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-12-07 13:11
Viewed: 692
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Muestra de sencillez y colorido del barrio más vivo de Sevilla.
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Hi Anaykike,
Great view of this nice balcony. Excellent contrasting colours and I like the blue theme init. Although you can improve this photo by increasing the size and give it a different crop. Refer my WS. Overall nice posting. Job well done and TFS!
Hans

Hello, Anaykike,
first of all I would like to welcome you here on TrekLens. I hope that you will meet a lot of new friends here and share a lot of photos from your beautiful country :)
You have presented to us a very beautiful view from daily life. Is it typical to have coloured windows? In my opinion, but only to make the photo look better, you should try to increase its size, try to keep the size to the limit which is 800. Also try to increase sharpness a bit.
Thanks for sharing your photo and looking forward to seeing more :)
Regards, Evgenia

mmm, los colores del sur de España. Yo tambien he hecho un workshop, espero que os guste como queda la imagen.

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  • sak Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 354 W: 14 N: 42] (2173)
  • [2006-12-07 13:58]

Hi,
Pretty shot. I like the colour and use of the rule of tree. Well done.

This could have been very nice if you had made the image larger. Try to use the full 800 pixels if you can.

good shot

s.

Good geometry and contrast but slight sharpness; not well focalized.

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