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Holly...
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Copyright: Anabel Perez (Nanita) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 1 N: 40] (1144)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03
Categories: Macro
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 3700
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-05 15:27
Viewed: 1303
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Holly, la de las horas negras (La posesión del humo II)

Hoy, querido, me rozan los tacones
y la luz se va en lo mejor del polvo.
La lluvia muerde un corazón.
Mi coño admite tus tarjetas.


Violeta C. Rangel


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Hi Anabel,
not keen on this one, I'm afraid. It looks like something you might have taken by accident. It's blurred and it's a pretty weird PoV. Both these things can work, but I don't think they do here.
Cheers, John.

This one is so attractive :) But the picture is not sucessful as the composition...

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  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 403 W: 112 N: 270] (3854)
  • [2008-03-05 18:34]

Hi Anabel,
I don't think that it is a great photography ... But it is very audacious to post it here, and I am pretty surprise that it is still on line ! But I have to notice that it had 106 views in 5 hours ! There must be something to look at, don't you think so ?
So my point is for all the interest that your picture cause. It is different, and just being different is something to notice in the numerous posting.
Ivan

Hi Anabel,

I'm sorry, I don't understand what you were trying to accomplish with this photo. It's quite blurry for starters. I'm sure there are ways in which this could work....

Lisa

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 508 W: 130 N: 954] (6996)
  • [2008-03-05 20:52]

Hi Anabel,sorry not my kind of image for Treklens,surprised it
was allowed,I'm no prude,I just believe there is a place for everything & IMHO this one is not for Treklens.

Ron

even though it is not for this website
i like it...:) ITS FUNNY AND SENSUAL hahaha

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  • codge Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 93 W: 11 N: 71] (613)
  • [2008-03-10 12:44]

I am not sure what you are trying to capture here as its out of focus. I don't agree with some though as they say that it should not be on treklens. Why not? it does not show anythink it shouldn,t so on that score i don't object
regards
codge

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  • karl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 145 W: 43 N: 41] (726)
  • [2008-06-02 10:51]

esto si que es una foto del c o ñ o !

A pasar de lo que digan me gusta la impresión de movimiento y lo fuera de foco, es como que uno viera una bella dama saltanto de repente delante de su vista y uno no llega a darse cuenta por la fugacidad

a la mierda las criticas vacias! segun cierta definicion de arte...arte es aquello que despierta una emocion sin especificar cual! enhorabuena! has revolucionado a mas de una mente lujuriosa que esperaba ver con mas detalles las intimidades de la modelo! y por cierto el poema me encanta:

"Irme de aquí, bah, ¡qué bobada!,
¿es que puedes elegir
con qué te acuestas?"

Violeta c. Rangel

ala! saludos!

alfredoo

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 579 W: 18 N: 295] (2100)
  • [2008-08-07 10:23]
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Even an erotic photo needs to have meaning ... This one misses out on that. Anyway, you are brave and I like that.

pues yo creo que es jugada, zarpada y bizarra y me gusta! aca estan todos acostumbrados a ver postales de paisajes y flores y uno muchas veces para ser "considerado" termina haciendolo tambien, yo creo que la toma me parece atrevida y mueve algo dentro de uno, tal vez si el zapato estuviera un poco mas hacia el centro podria ser mas del agrado de los "adora-postales"
un saludo :)
Natalia!

Hermoso vista, libre y audaz. Un guiño a la belleza y a la sensualidad.
Bravo.

Bad...in everyway

Hola Anabel,
que c'est libre, osé, et beau!
Bravo;
Gwendolyn

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