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Copyright: Carlos climent (solrac) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 241 W: 0 N: 50] (2307)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-05
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D90, Nikon 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G IF-ED AF-S VR
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-23 10:39
Viewed: 151
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
I was impressed I think it makes her look more human than many humans

Good weekend
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Hi Carlos,
I think you captured the monkey in a most beautiful way but your PP work made it look less beautiful. It is as if you cut and pasted the animal onto a black background and amputated part of its body. There are no arms and parts of the body and head are gone. I really would love to see the untouched version to see the reason why you did this. Also, if you do go for a total black BG, make sure you don't forget spots. The left upper corner has some green spots.
Regards,
Niek

Carlos
What a great capture this lovely look:is like human!
Mariana

Hi Carlos,
Again a wonderful portrait of a primat.
Crisp image well presented details and perfect lightening.You haev captured an unforgettable facial expression
TFS
Selahattin E

Hola Carlos!

Otra vez??? Acabo de llegar mejor jugador cada día. Ella tiene un Mohawk y un bigote ... mi tipo de mujer. :)

Gran claridad! Muy bien hecho!

TFS
Dennis

Hey Carlos, you again :-)
Super presentation of this monkey! Very nice is the appearance out of the black. Great compo, colors, sharpness, etc.
TFS
Joop!

Olá Carlos, boa tarde,
Que grande foto aqui! Magnífico foco, cores e, sobretudo a iluminação da cena.
belo olhar,
Tnha um bom dia,
Raimundo

Hi Carlos,

I think your capture of the suject is superb in sharpness and exposure. I also agree with your note. Unfortunately I also have to agree with Niek regarding your pp work. The black background works well against the animal, but the cut and paste cut too much away in areas.

Hope your weekend is good as well.

Best regards,
Werner

Hi Carlos...great face, great shot...

Roger

Hola Carlos,
Very nice portrait again vith great lighting and details.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

With regard to comment from suntoucher I think you need to explain a little more why you have taken the shot (and why you have cropped it a certain way) I think rightly or wrongly that you were trying to show the face rather than the whole monkey. It does show intelligence and a questioning look and an awareness that some people appear to lack ! Colours are wonderful TFS
warm regards
David

Great expression and good POV! Nice PP work to isolate any distractions and show up all the details of this jolly fella!

cheers,

dilshan

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1036 W: 81 N: 66] (12454)
  • [2009-10-23 22:08]

dear Carlos,
yes her eyes are very charming than some human eyes.
and her expression looks showing deep thoughtful mind also more deep some human minds.
whole her body with silver fur is very pretty too, and the red under mouth looks like her splendid lipstick.
thank you for your excellent shot,
Akihisa

Excelente toma, aproximacion, composicion,encuadre, nitidez y color , abrazos

Hello Carlos,
The glistening eyes and the facial expressions are indeed human like. A superb work. Regards
Danilo

Hi Carlos,
Intriguing shot! The facial expression is priceless. I like the way it seems to emerge from the dark, would make a good photo for a wildlife magazine. Great use of the focal length to get nice and close.

TFS,
Scott.

Hi Carlos,
Amazing presentation, beautiful colors!
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

Bonsoir Carlos,
Quel extraordinaire animal!!!!
Superbe photo!
Bravo.
TFS
Catherine

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