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Window
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Copyright: Xavier Alvarez (earelin) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 5] (67)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-27
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Canon 300D, Canon 28-80 f3.5-5.6, 58mm UV
Exposure: f/8, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-06-28 5:57
Viewed: 487
Points: 5
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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2006-06-28 13:02]

Hi Xavier,

Welcome to Trek L.
Well done on this capture and composition.

Mike

Welcome to TL! A well-spotted subject for a photograph, strong colours and you have achieved excellent some good results.
I would suggest you look at the rotation and crop of your photograph for a start, you've cut off the bottom of the window frame, and it's not entirely straight within the frame - which, in a photograph like this, is very important to get right.
Keep posting - and try some alternative compositions, placing the window somewhere other than the centre of your shot.
Welcome again, and thanks for sharing.
Rew

Xavier,

creo que tu imagen se puede potenciar con un enmarcado y un poco de brillo, espero que sea de tu agrado.
Dejo un WS del resultado.

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