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Mermaid


Mermaid
Photo Information
Copyright: Vicente Co (moratallo) (259)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Pentax Optio S50
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-01 16:29
Viewed: 837
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This afternoon we felt like playing.

She was brave enough.. and I was delighted.

We took quite a few pictures but this is my favourite.
The rest were too "obvious"... you know. ;-)

Enjoy.
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  • Enric Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 55 N: 526] (5870)
  • [2007-05-01 17:16]

Me gusta la idea, muy sugerente con la muchacha vestida de blanco entre las aguas. Me habría gustado verla en blanco y negro, y con ella sumergida un palmo más, para apreciar el vestido flotando a su alrededor.

Enric.

Vicente,
Wonderful photo. It really caught my eye. I love the white dress and her tan against the water. Great composition and subject and subtle. She looks like she's having great fun. Thanks for sharing. :) Just a suggestion, how about posting some of the other photos in a workshop. Would love to see them.
Linda

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  • luisa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 0 N: 73] (1382)
  • [2007-05-01 19:11]

Great idea and photo!!
Love it!

**

Nice work - the colours are the strongest element of this one, dress and skin vs. the sea.

The POV could have been stronger - the alignment of the top of her head with the horizon causes a slight conflict that doesn't quite work, perhaps if you were lower down - or she was further out, with more zoom ...

A good shot though, I like it!

Rew

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  • Tzazu Gold Star Critiquer [C: 266 W: 31 N: 77] (3500)
  • [2007-05-02 4:20]

Hola Vicente!
Qué buena idea. La foto es muy bonita y al contrario de Enric yo sí que la prefiero en color. También podría haber estado bien ver el perfil de la muchacha, pero en fin, todo es difícil tenerlo.
Saludos,
Arantxa

Hola Vicente.

Es una imagen muy bonita y como dice Enric, me hubiera gustado verla en blanco y negro.

Un saludo

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4763] (21685)
  • [2007-06-02 6:40]

Hi Co...
Very nice portrait, details are beautiful, very well done,
congratulations, George

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