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Baluarte


Baluarte
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Copyright: Ra Fer (ChuFer) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 138 W: 15 N: 0] (2294)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-10
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-05-15 2:55
Viewed: 177
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
"Baluarte building" in Pamplona, Navarra, Sapain.
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Hello, Ra -
Excellent graphic image with warm, bright colors and sharp details. The reflection in the higher window adds an artistic flair. Well done.

Hello,
This is an interesting architectural photo, especially because of the interaction whith the passers-by. It shows how tiny they are compared with the huge windows.
Said this, I think your framing (too large, showing also the tree and the sky), as well as the added black border (not necessary), alter the graphic effect of your photo. I would have opted for a thighter framing and no border at all, as the building itself suffices to produce a strong visual impact.
Just my personal opinion, of course. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

Bom dia Ra
Very interesting architecture and you did an excellent photo.
It works really well.
I see Erik workshop...when I look your photo I have the same Idea for the crop...but because I see your work I must believe that was your choice...any way I must say i will do the same that Erik...but I feel your choice very interesting
I like it very much.
Have a good WE
My regards
teresa

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