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Spaghettis anyone ??


Spaghettis anyone ??
Photo Information
Copyright: Martha Marugan (Eden) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 50 N: 86] (2084)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Food
Camera: canon powershot pro1, 58mm UV Filter
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/20 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): In the kitchen [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-02-18 14:15
Viewed: 523
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ingredients to make a tasty pasta dish :) enjoy
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Hi Martha,
Very colorful pic.The only missing thing is boiling water :))
Loved this shot very much.
TFS with us.
Best wishes,
Acar

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  • Sans1 Gold Star Critiquer [C: 463 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-02-18 14:33]

Beautiful sharp colors- wonderful shot! Well done!

Regards,
Steve

hello Martha. a superb still life, something what I find terrible diffecult work. this is very well.
Frans

Hola Martha,

Olvidastes lo mas importante... el agua!

Buena composición y buen colorido, el fondo negro, bien elegido. Quizás y solo para ser perfeccionista, un poco desenfocado el primer plano de componentes, sobretodo el laurel.

saludos,

ferran

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2006-02-19 10:21]

This is nice Eden ! Very good.Thanks
Rob

Yes it's a good start! The last i did i include even some red wine in the recipe. It was delicious! I like your disposition. It give taste to cooking!

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  • redol Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 260 W: 33 N: 12] (2254)
  • [2006-02-20 3:56]

Jejejeje. Veo que estamos los dos con los bodegones.
Me gusta el tema, bien dispuestos los elementos y muy bien elegidos. El fondo perfecto, aunque admite variaciones.
Pegas: La iluminación puntual del flash deja reflejos muy fuertes en el metal. De todas maneras los bodegones con metal o vidrio son muy difícilies de sacar bien.
El punto de vista es muy bajo, un plano picado ayuda a dar tridimensionalidad a la imagen y ¿está un poco desenfocada? Si has usado una apertura de diafragma muy grande, para los bodegones (salvo excepciones) hay que usar diafragmas cerrados, f11 o superior.
Un buen bodegón, vas por buen camino.
Besos.

Hola Martha ..
It seems ages ago that we where in touch, but this very nice photo made me step on your doormat again.
How are you .. and why have we '' not be together in
TL such a lomg time ?! This photo is good! Yes.. very good, the compo..colours and black background..
Well done! Hope to ''see '' you again soon!!
Abrazo..
John

Your exposure is perfect in this image, although I notice that the angle of light differs from that of the Food Photographers. But it doesn't matter, your image is technical still very good.

Tip: next time wipe the tomatoes with a cloth damped in glycerine - it will take away any dull edges on the food.

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