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Reflexion


Reflexion
Photo Information
Copyright: rafael cruz (nearko) (59)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-08
Categories: Macro
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-02-14 5:06
Viewed: 1035
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 25
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mirada glauca, cual Gorgona pareces,
el mar emula el color de tus ojos,
bravo te envuelve en su espuma
queriendo evolverte y llevarte al fondo
de su seno donde una vez dicen , surgiste;
te dejas acariciar complaciente
haciendo sucumbir a este,
que de rodillas te admira, petrificado,
cautivada mi alma por el brillo
insondable de esos ojos mediterraneos.


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Lovely picture...

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  • shal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 165 W: 46 N: 161] (1304)
  • [2007-02-14 5:13]

Hi Rafeal,
Welcome to TL,
nice framing and highkey here,
Cheers :D

wow great
Giorgio

Excellent POV. Like the washed out look. Alfred

Water behind her creates sensuality. Great timing

Cheers, Tjutjut

Hello Rafael,


It's a nice shot and interesting POV. First i thought about snow because the OE capture : So, white Over-exposed it's a clever choice.
Good work, and welcome to TL. Hope to see more of your work soon...
Best regards
Pascal

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  • rater Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 201 W: 52 N: 111] (957)
  • [2007-02-14 8:12]

Good compo and good choice of B&W.

TFS

Perfect exposure.
Perfect composition.
Perfect subject.

tfs

Petar

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4762] (21679)
  • [2007-02-14 10:01]

Hi Pierre... Very beautiful B&W and well done!
Happy Valentine's Day to you and a model to... George

Welcome to TL,
I'm not a fan of nude but this one is very interesting: I like very much the water effect in the back of the model. Great shutter speed and great exposure. And to finish the framing is very unusual, you would have put the model in the middle and you don't, that's great, good job for a first shot in tl!!!

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  • jacobo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 666 W: 31 N: 673] (4875)
  • [2007-02-14 14:10]

Muy interesante esta figura en la playa disfrutando de las olas. El blanco y negro perfecto. Encuentro que el encuadre esta un poco forzado hacia la izquierda y es una pena que le corte el pié. Muy buena la sensacion de movimiento del agua.
Saludos
Jacobo

Welcome to TL Rafael
Nice shot - I like the composition, and in this case your overexposed surf works well to highlight your subject.
It would be great to read a note with your posting, I generally won't critique shots without them. ;)
Great work
Rew

Pues al igua que te dije en Trek...Toma ya!!!!
Genial Rafi
Guapisima,...la foto, ...bueno y la modelo tambien.Un beso Maria.

Luz,reflejos,una fiesta de brillos sobre el mar que hacen destacar un cuerpo humano desnudo.Bella imagen.
Buen encuadre desequilibrado,atipico.
Como te dije lo unico que le falta a esta foto pa ser perfecta es no ser cuadrada,un esquema que,a mi entender,muy dificilmente funciona con las fotos.

Bravo!

Ah, me encanta que te hayas saltao un poquillo las reglas..jeje.

  • Good 
  • jepoy (98)
  • [2008-05-07 5:19]

wooh.. very nice photo.. very artistic!

tfs!

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