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Looking for Freedom


Looking for Freedom
Photo Information
Copyright: Gabriel Bau (Io_de_Gris) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 84 W: 8 N: 21] (487)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02-19
Categories: Event, Experimental
Exposure: f/4, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-02-21 5:34
Viewed: 576
Points: 65
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
From the interior I outside watch with desire to leave... although outside he is dark, always is a hope ray... inside, I rot
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Nice image, i like the POV you have chosen and the textures you have captured.
The dark clouds outside add to that sad isolated mood.
Its a pity the top of the window frame has been cropped out. But still good image.

TFS Tracey

Hi Gabriel
Welcome to TL
Nice POV of the window and good composition
TFS...
Cheers
Lance

good photo great pov and composition but if u put the window in center or use other golden point to put ur subject on it would be better but still great shot
well done

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1658 W: 0 N: 1] (10653)
  • [2007-02-21 7:15]
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Hi Gabriel
Nice comp.in good colours.
Gr Jos

Muy buenas la luz y texturas
y tambien el color.
Saludos

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2046 W: 135 N: 3062] (16543)
  • [2007-02-21 15:44]
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Hi Gabriel,

Excellent shot... great POV and composition, well considerate and arrange. I also like the rays... but just find it a bit out of alignment with the shadows of the bar and the position of the sun.. Is this just one photo or two photos combine? just curious... :D thanks for sharing

Cheers,
Sweety

Hi Gabriel. This is a wonderful shot and pov you got. The mood is well-expressed, somewhat somber and has a nice moodiness to it in a seasonal way. TFS.

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1585 W: 0 N: 172] (12217)
  • [2007-02-21 18:37]
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Hello Gabriel!
Nice point of view of the windows with good colors. I like this shot! Thanks for sharing
Regards
Diane

Un buena composición a destacar por e mucho significado de la imagen, un buen punto de vista y una buena luz,


buen trabajo,
Clara

Hello Gabriel!!
Original photo!!
Interesting composition and good perspective!!
nice view!!

Monika..

Great composition..

Super idea..

Congratulations...

Best regards,
Sandu

Hola Gabriel, bonita imagen, bien lograda. He intentado en varias ocasiones sacar una foto parecida....pero la verdad es que me has superado.A mi no se me dió tan bien. Bravo. Me encanta.
Un saludo

Very nice compo, I like the sky color. Thanks for sharing!

Aunque pueda haber nubarrones, es mejor estar afuera, porque tambien puedes ver el sol.
Gran foto

Que bien tratada, ahi has tenido una grandisima idea,me inquieta muchisimo esta ventana, muy buen trabajo de verdad, sigue asi.

Un beso, Sara.

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  • Nixx Silver Star Critiquer [C: 35 W: 0 N: 1] (73)
  • [2007-02-26 15:44]
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¡Muy bien Gabi! Tiene una luz increíble, mágica. Imagen clara, bien compuesta... genial.
¡Un beso!

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  • sufi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 752 W: 7 N: 104] (1326)
  • [2007-02-27 10:55]
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Hi Gabriel...
It's a perfect point of view and great title, indeed... The tones of the pastel, the light,
the texture and the details of the old wall are perfect...
TFS...
Stay well..
Salim.

Hi Gabriel,

Beautiful visual, you already tried to do in b/w, I believe that it would be wonderful also.
i like the POV you have chosen and the textures you have captured.
I like this shot!
Congratulations

Sérgio

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  • Andys Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 131 W: 19 N: 62] (931)
  • [2007-02-28 17:17]
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When i first looked at this I just saw a window, but if you take the time to look you see the true impact of this shot, the textures the contrasting colours and that impressive and forbading sky. nice work
TFS

y 40.
Se feliz con la montaña de puntos, Gabriel
Edén

Hello Gabriel,
I really like this image. The quality of the image is great and I like the shadows that are produced by the window and bars. The old rustic wall looks great as does the sun's ray's in the cloudy sky. Nice one.
Cheers,
Debbie

What a beautiful picture! I really like the sky in the window. Good POV!! It's very net and clear! Maybe just down a little bit the window to see all the line.. but it's a really great composition!
TFS,
Genevieve

Hi Gabriel.
This is best photo. Very nice excercise with the colour, structure and focus. Very well done. tfs. Stev

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 704 W: 11 N: 91] (3512)
  • [2007-04-25 5:56]

very nice shot Gabriel
great composition\
good pov
David

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1185 W: 35 N: 1970] (11208)
  • [2007-04-25 10:19]

Nice talking picture, very creative along with your note.
good colours and well done exposition cooperating with light.
TFS - Tom
:) will follow

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  • cycle Gold Star Critiquer [C: 164 W: 0 N: 1] (968)
  • [2007-05-11 7:50]

very interesting view and compo.
Bravo

the real freedom comes from within. take care, my friend.
regards,
cal

Me gusta esta foto.

La idea (sabes que tambien lo he intentado), es muy buena, sólo que no me gusta que corte la ventana por arriba, creo que le falta más margen. Aire, no? aunque por aire aqui, no será!

Bueno, te doy un minipunto!!

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 3 COLORS - 3

Average: 3.00

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

Hi Gabriel!Very nice photo!Great work.
Greetings
A.

Hola Gabriel,

Fantástica captura, la composición muy creativa y original, buenos tonos y perfecta la luz con las sombras. Buen trabajo.

Saludos,

Pako

Gabriel,
Excelente composición, muy bien expuesta, colores, tierras, cal, òxido y cielo, buen trabajo! Tienes trabajos muy interesenates...Marta

Hello Gabriel,
This is a breath-taking photo, indeed. We really feel the "urge" for freedom. The opposition between the textures of the wall and those of the sky is really effective. The same goes for the light inside and outside. Interesting composition as well, with the location of the window forcing us to look up to the sky - to freedom.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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