Late is the buss

Critiques [Translate]

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• SylFondacci (14018)
• [2007-03-21 16:46]

Clones ? or nearly ones ...
The one on the right seems to be exhausted and bored and the other out of reach as she is in her world.
Great capture of daily life in our world of communication !
Sylvie

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• cleocat (4228)
• [2007-03-21 16:50]

You captured the boredom and frustration of these 2 very well. The background looks a bit tilted but that can enhances the feeling of frustration in the viewer. Not necessarily bad then.

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• WTS (1123)
• [2007-03-21 16:51]

Hi Alban, this made me think of a police lineup(no I have not been in one)because of the BG, with its lines.
This is a great shot of daily life, and the facial and body expressions say it all, nicely done
Wayne

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• maleentjeh (14627)
• [2007-03-21 16:58]

Hi Alban, great urban shot, strange line up, well seen.

Marleen

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• TasmaniaC (5116)
• [2007-03-21 17:49]
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Hi Alban, great catch, full of graphical elements and very impressive. I think the footpath was not straight normally and you have rotated the photo to have it parallel but the lines at background have a stronger effect and are a bit distracting, having them straight may have been better.. tfs

aK

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• iliannak (3382)
• [2007-03-21 18:03]

great job Alban :o)
from the thumbnail i thought it was a compo of two shots of the same person
great composition, even the color of their cloths matches
i guess this is the nice side of busses being late
many TFS it
ili :o)

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• ScottHale (3962)
• [2007-03-21 19:35]

Alban,
This should be dedicated to all those people who DONT have iPods. The girl on the right seems bored, mad and frustrated. The one on the left seems in another world, stress free because she has an iPod and sunglasses on, perhaps further isolating her from the world outside. This would make a good advertisement! I like the separation of these subjects and the totally different styles of fashion here. Well captured.
Scott

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• gavindya (3831)
• [2007-03-22 0:13]

Hi Alban,

fantastic Ad work here, very professional portrait. lighting, colours, POV and DOV look so perfect to me, an also models expression and pose look like thay are an artis, wardrobe and make up awesome too, this is great !
tfs
Haldian

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• pozaru (15853)
• [2007-03-22 3:23]

Confusing lines an patterns and great capture of boredom and its clone.
Excellent seen and done, as always !

v
ps.Sorry I'm out of points

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• kiti (0)
• [2007-03-22 5:02]

Una foto muy urbana, simpatica y buen punto de vista, la foto da la sencacion de moviento auqnue estas chicas esten quietas pasan muchas cosas por su cabeza,

saludos,

cristina

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• cloverstar (24490)
• [2007-03-22 9:31]

I like the simplicity of this scene. Just two people and the lines of the background. I see a slight tilt to the right, but that can easily be rotated just a bit. Well done.

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• allanbarredo (6776)
• [2007-03-27 22:19]

Hi Alban,

I like this candid shot of city life. The contrast of the human subjects with the patterns of the wall makes it very interesting. TFS

Allan

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• Biance- (165)
• [2007-03-27 22:49]

Nice!

Alban this is a very interesting shot, both girls occupied with their own stances/thoughts... so different, yet much the same I suppose... boredom! :) I like the shoes they're wearing... I like the 'city' feel that this image transmits, wonderful work... tfs.

Biance.

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• FotoMario (77)
• [2007-05-22 19:10]

Hello.
Loved this urban scene. Great composition.
I think tough that the background is a little tilted and this can be fixed.
Congratulations