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The same, just red


The same, just red
Photo Information
Copyright: Michael Papendieck (MichaelPe) (72)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon 350 D, Cannon 50mm, f1.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-06 0:52
Viewed: 421
Points: 2
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Swedish girl, former gymnast
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To rewshearer: critiques....removedatomas59 2 12-08 03:27
To Kilted-Arab: Poor little "Kilted-Arab"MichaelPe 13 12-06 17:38
To macromania: not good enough for himatomas59 1 12-06 17:00
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Hi Michael! In order to help you make the most of your time here in Treklens, it's worth noting some points from the site guidelines.

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Hope this helps!

Love your shots so far Michael, you are a master in the studio. Composition, lighting,colour and skin tones are just spot on. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Regards Mark :)

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  • atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 433 W: 404 N: 295] (2314)
  • [2008-12-06 16:57]

same boring set up, camera to low...can't see the back, i don't like orange.

This is a so-so shot, I think the mistake here was poor direction of pose; her leading thigh looks foreshortened by the perspective.

IMO it's a shame you didn't make better use of your studio and include more reflection, rather than the negative space above.

You have skill and knowledge, it's a pity you don't feel generous enough to make critiques of others here.

Rew

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