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Photo Information
Copyright: Patrick Jacobson (Sepharial) (221)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09
Categories: Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-20 6:43
Viewed: 550
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken from my 5th floor window. Cropped in Photoshop.
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To carmem_busko: Hi Carmem!Sepharial 1 10-22 02:54
To TheZubial: Thanks!Sepharial 1 10-20 07:53
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A nice shot Patrick
I like the composition and the tones .
(The man position, the different nature of road, ...)
I think it would be greater with a complete Shadow. No? I don't know. (or the best would be a shadow parallel wtih the road lines, but you can't change the sun position ;o)
Nevertheless, It'a very nice photo

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  • lady Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 167 W: 0 N: 20] (1443)
  • [2004-10-20 9:27]

J'aime beaucoup cette photo en plongée, et le sépia qui donne un climat spécial...bravo

Belle utilisation du sépia dans la présentation de cette composition très intéressante avec ses textures et l'ombrage qui dominent. Angle de la prise de vue intéressant. Bien fait.
Bye, Jacques

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  • cwong Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 89 W: 14 N: 43] (332)
  • [2004-10-21 3:01]
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Hi Patrick. This photo has a nice composition. I think if you included the whole shadow, it would also be nice... I think. =) It's just my idea. But anyway, it's still a very nice photo.
Cathy

Hi, Patrick.. have you seen the related site TE? Your photo is perfect to current scavenger hunt's item "A picture taken from up to down".
Take a look on it!
I agree with Cathy: it would better if you had included the whole shadow... but anyway, your picture is well composed, and it´s perfect in duotone.
Cheers!
Carmem

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