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...The One Who Left...


...The One Who Left...
Photo Information
Copyright: Patrick Jacobson (Sepharial) (221)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-10-26
Categories: Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-30 8:48
Viewed: 620
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Snapshot taken at Halmstad Castle. These are some of the doors to the castle itself. We dont talk 1200 century castle here! ;)

Hope you like it! Honest comments and analyzes are always welcome! If you think its bad.. please give me inputs of what you think should be different! =)

Nikon D70 + Tamron SP AF 90mm F/2.8 Di

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To Nessuno: Hi and thanks!Sepharial 1 10-30 13:13
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Well, imo your picture lacks nothing!
It has style, the bw does a good job here, there is an element of interrest in the man just leaving. Did you do PP work on the wall?
Well done, its a keeper!

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  • Peeotr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 148 N: 322] (2301)
  • [2004-10-30 13:44]

The symmetry is a rule on your photo :-) very consequently realized - not only horizontally but verically too. Congratulations for finding and observing it. Another point of this photo is the contrast between smooth wall and other details - doors in centre, lamps and flowerpots.

The man disturbs this symmetry - is unexpected, doesn't fit the rules. I like this contrast. I think B&W emphasizes this.

My only technical doubt is overexposed head.
Good work, very nice photo to look at.
P.

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  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
  • [2004-10-31 10:25]

I liked the light and contrast 'clair-obscure'. Your picture send me to memories of Hamlet or an scene of a Ingmar Beergman 'film. Good scenary, composition and light!
I first imagine that the man didn'nt have a determined face..only a white mask as in Mimes what will be the effect?..
Thanks you for sharing!
José A.

I like the symetrical placement of the lights and the central position of the door, but I feel the gentleman needs a little bit more space to the right (his left), as he is facing in that direction.
Other than that, this is a superb composition with great lighting.

Sorry, out of todays points allowance.

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