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empty bottles


empty bottles
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Copyright: omer yasan (omeryasan) (103)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-01-27
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Kodak EasyShare DX7590, Schneider Kreuznach 38-380mm
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/1000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-02-08 9:04
Viewed: 503
Points: 1
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Omer,
Your composition had a good intention, but the execution could have being better done. The building in the background spoils the bottles attention. Much less DOF should be used to take the entire background out of the composition.
I also would increase light in the front of the bottles to really bring it to first attention plan.
Lastly, notes are very well regarded and expected in TL. In any language.
Cheers,
Wellington
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