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Gewitterstimmumg


Gewitterstimmumg
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Copyright: Sebastian Obermaier (swo) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 6] (228)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-20
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon G9
Exposure: f/4, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-10 14:07
Viewed: 691
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Gewitterstimmung im St. Anna Schärengarten in Schweden - auf unserer sog. Barschinsel.
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Hi Sebastian,
nice try but, overall, it's a little bit too distracting. It looks rather busy and there is no point of interest really. Not to mention the light is a little too harsh too.
If I were you, I'd probably walked further up to the the end of the rock and shoot from there.
Close down the aperture to f22, fill your foreground with those rock and perhaps, if shooting vertically, place the forests 1/3 off the bottom frame and let the dark dramatic sky be the dominant feature. Most of all, if the weather permits, it should've been shot either during first or last light. Inconvenient time for many, but the result is usually more than satisfactory.
Good luck next time friend!:-)

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