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Red door II


Red door II
Photo Information
Copyright: Mats Karlsson (matspia) (80)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-11
Categories: Architecture, Experimental, Abstract
Camera: Canon 350 D, 18-200mm F3,5-6,3 DC Sigma, 1.0G Compact Flash
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-09-11 23:23
Viewed: 439
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another red door at Stora Kvinns, Långbro, this one partially concealed by corner of a wall. Again, I wanted to get away from the "door" feeling and concentrate on geometrical shapes.
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Hi Mats,

I like the idea (sometimes I like to play with shapes and geometry too). With nice light and pleasant textures it could have been very good, minimalistic and clear shot. But there's an issue here which breakes the idea: the rightmost part of the photo which being blurred does not form a flat surface with the rest of the photo (fooling the viewer which - I assume - was your intention). It reveals that this is part of the wall, closer to the camera. If used deeper DOF, the problem wouldn't arise.

Marek

very nice shot with good composition. good POV. very well done. thanks for sharing.
M.Y.

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