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Tous les Moulins...


Tous les Moulins...
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Copyright: Viviane Faguay (Porteplume) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 114 W: 26 N: 52] (547)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-06
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Fuji Finepix S602Z
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Windmills [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-11-25 13:36
Viewed: 2702
Points: 23
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Comme le chemin de ronde
Que font sans cesse les heures
Le voyage autour du monde
D'un tournesol dans sa fleur
Tu fais tourner de ton nom
Tous les moulins de mon cœur...

Having turned the picture in B&W and made the contrasts stronger.

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Très beau noir et blanc Viviane.
Très belle photo, avec un arrière plan bien neutre.
Bravo

Cette image est surprenante! elle paraît tirée d'une BD. la forme, le contour et la lumière sont magnifiques, seule l’accentuation sur les contours me parait trop fort. Bien joué Viviane pour ce beau N&B. Fred

Even though the photo is a bit pixelated it looks good. The gradual grey scale of the sky is effective and the wind-mill looks its best.

A lovely 'Ölandskvarn', Viviane, one of those stump windmills so typical for Öland - making me long to go there again. Nice POV - a bit low, looking up - displaying the back, showing the steps and the entrance. Also the log handle used to turn the whole mill around is clearly shown. I believe there are a couple of extra supports - one on each side - keeping this mill stable. The B&W looks very nice, especially the sky came out well, but you've got quite a bit of pixelation around some parts of the mill, which I don't understand. I've heard about 'the windmills of my mind...', but never about 'les moulins de mon cœur...' Very well done!

Good b&w capture. Very interesting windmill in need of some repairs. Well shown.

Deja je suis passionnée de noir et blanc, et d'autre part j'adore les vieux monuments! je trouve qu'ils se marient très bien ensemble.
elodie

good shot! but I don't see a sunflower hehe..i like the B/W version of this one....

Such an old windmill Vivianne. I like the black and white, and that lovely graduated colour of the sky. Maybe the pixelation was caused from NeatImage. I find their auto setting of 60% rather high for certain areas of photos. BradP from TL suggested once that the use of a blur tool can erase a lot of the marks. I tried it, and it works fine.

Un moulin tout droit sorti d'un conte, Viviane ...
Bravo pour cette composition onirique !
Sylvie

Hey viviane,very nice rustic,peaceful shot!the b&w works very well, the dark bits have something treathning and the light have somethinh pecaful!
good shot!

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  • jude Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 51 W: 1 N: 10] (447)
  • [2005-01-02 19:19]

salut vivianne,

je dois dire que je suis impressionné !!
et je souhaiterais que quand vous avez un moment vous me disiez qu'elle tournure doivent mes prises prendre pour arriver a evoluer.

encore merci pr ces beaux clichés !

Jude
ps
voici les liens :
http://www.treklens.com/members/jude/photos/

http://www.trekearth.com/members/jude/photos/

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1265 W: 153 N: 729] (8683)
  • [2005-07-13 17:10]

Bonjour Viviane! En effet, quel choix judicieux d'obter pour le N&B, quelle belle composition, quelle belle photo! C'est un excellent travail!

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