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Copyright: Cerys Hearsey (Cerys_H) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 46 W: 4 N: 27] (323)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-10-29 8:27
Viewed: 411
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I am only just starting to take pictures of people - I was pleased with different PoV as i was not convinced at the time.
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Ciao..mi piace
questa foto
all'apparenza semplice...
ma bellissima
nella sua semplicità...
Complimenti

Alexia

J'aime beaucoup, mais un petit recadrage s'impose selon moi, afin d'enlever l'objet en haut. J'essais un ''worhshop''.

Bonne journée!

France

The composition here is good, off-centre placement of subject. Her outfit, with the stripy socks, is eyecatching too. The available light was excellent.

I very much like your use of negative space here.

Rew

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  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 403 W: 112 N: 270] (3854)
  • [2008-10-29 17:56]

Hi Cerys,
Interesting plays of repetitive lines. The touch of red add just enough to catch the eyes and the person break the straight geometrical presentation. Well balanced, well seen, TFS,
Ivan

It reminds me of a Bob Marley song: "waiting in vain for my love..." Well, I do like it. I suppose it's the clean and nice composition, or maybe the interesting texture of the sidewalk, or the sad expression of the girl - who can tell?
Just a curiosity: the bench looks like an indian bed so we can imagine the girl expectations... (:-
All the best,
Donato

Hello Cerys,
The strong point to this image is that the composition is well setup as the subject-the woman-is placed at the left third as she is facing forward and towards the camera. A strong element in this capture for sure. The setting with the lone bench and single subject also makes for a striking and strong final image,
Excellent portrait...
Steve

Nicely framed and capture.

Hello Cerys

I would say this is a very good picture but...I did send you a workshop just to give you my POV.

Cheers,Lucky.

Ps; Very good pic really but what is important is only the kind of message you are transmitting.


One thinks I would have avoid, on top the white marks are quit disturbing.

The second one, is a personal choice

If the girl is in the middle, she is the centre of you pic, she has a dominant place and become the subject,
By putting the girl closer to the edge you create space and solitude First you see the space and after the girl.

First the space, after that the girl and back to the space.
I hope you understand my POV it’s not always easy to explain this in English.

even with more empty space it could be interesting, good subject,
jc

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