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Copyright: Mireille Stegmuller (Mireille) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 3 N: 9] (327)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2002-04
Categories: Friends/Family
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): A Beautiful Child [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-04-05 8:05
Viewed: 1284
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Another niece (I've got a lot of : 6 !) She is really gorgeous and awake for her age, she's got 3 sisters and 2 brothers and she's the smallest.

I took this picture during Easter time, 2 years ago.
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There are a lot of nice elements in this picture: a uniform green background, colorful face and dress, the wind in the hair and her natural expression. these all make this so unique. simply beautiful.
on the other hand i see a little noise and the focus seems to be not on the face.

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  • cxxl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 135 W: 11 N: 73] (1335)
  • [2004-04-05 8:17]
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A beautiful shot of a gorgeous girl. Unfortunately the focus just missed and got her sholder/orange collar.. not the face. Still, I think the added softness to the face is OK. Well captured Mireille.

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2004-04-05 10:52]

Amazing shot Mireille. Like the colors and the DOF. Compostion is also very good. You are the children's portrait artist.

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  • Tim Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 188 W: 18 N: 241] (1137)
  • [2004-04-14 23:58]

Mireille, This one will definately be placed in the theme folder entitled "A Beautiful Child." Thanks for sharing and God's best to you, Tim

It's a very natural, colourful portrait. She conveys perfectly innocence and hapinness. I like also the blurred background. I am not very bothered with the focus being on the fleece.

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  • hftey Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 75 W: 3 N: 32] (328)
  • [2004-06-12 20:48]

Really nice candid shot. The face is a little out of focus but it is still a nice shot.

Congratulations my friend! Greeeat depth of field... Amazing colours... The wind the her hairs show us the movement of the picture. The girl smiling sound like she was having a nice time! The contrast between her yellow coat and the green background is perfect! For me, itīs a real perfect picture! Well done!!

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