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The bus


The bus
Photo Information
Copyright: Olivier Kaenzig (olivier) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 21 W: 21 N: 9] (160)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-03-28
Categories: Transportation, Abstract
Camera: Olympus C-750 UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-10-13 15:52
Viewed: 555
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A charter bus photographied from a footbridge over national highway A5, and a grate and a stripe joining in. It was the day after i bought my digital camera, it was sunny, spring was waking up again, and at this day i'd never have thought that this picture could lead to this almost abstract composition.

PP : cropping, 100% contrast rise, desaturation except for the coloured parts, saturation rise for these parts, frame.
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To SylFondacci: Recadrages etc.olivier 2 10-13 18:10
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Beau cadrage, comme je les aime : cadrer jusqu'à ce que le sujet perde de son essence pour donner une autre image, sortie tout droit de l'imagination. Abstrait est bien le mot.
De plus, joli mariage de bleu, de jaune et de noir métallique !
Bravo !

I like that. The diagonal line is great, and even if you almost don´t see the bus, it is the stongest element. Colors are great and the black heavy frame was well chosen.

Nice to see this bus from such a diferent angle.

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