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agosto 2006


agosto 2006
Photo Information
Copyright: Carolina Del Bue (CarolinaDB) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 35 W: 0 N: 12] (469)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-08
Categories: Mood
Camera: F100
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Rhymea's favourite [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-01-10 15:43
Viewed: 805
Points: 22
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Hi Carolina,
Good compo with nice perspective and subject well positioned, good light too.
The idea of b&w is interesting for an image we would have imagined in colours regarding the season and the mood.
Sylvie

Hi, Carlolina, what a striking composition. Beautiful tones and an interesting point of view. That hot white disk of the sun in the pool, with the dark body of the man nearby makes an impression. It could be agosto 1955 for all we can tell here. Timeless. (How about a note?) -Hugh

Kind of an intriguing image! The dark man floating on the water, the funny angle at which you took the shot, the whole composition, everything makes this photo very compelling to watch. Nice job!

Beautiful composition and detail. B&W suits it well.

TFS,
David

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  • kojak Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 0 N: 72] (666)
  • [2007-01-10 20:30]
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Great B&W, Carolina! Great POV and framing. You made this scene to something really special.
It really has style, but then again, you are from Milan, right? ;)
Greeting, Geert

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  • rebel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 228 W: 65 N: 14] (1177)
  • [2007-01-11 11:43]

Bardzo fajny pomysł i wykonania, wybór b&w tworzy fajny kontraścik
Marcin

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2007-01-14 12:27]
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I find it unusual. Good unusual. The idea is great and the realization is good. However, you might have shifted to the right a bit more and include the white stripe of the pool, giving a more tilted appearance. That way I think you would have avoided the negative space on the left, boost the dynamic of the scene by including more geometry (in contrast with the human moment) and enable a deeper perspective on the top.

Anyway, there are always options, but two smiles well deserved for originality.

A.

Ciao Carolina,
una bella realizzazione, in particola modo mi piace l' angolo di ripresa. Brava.

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 738 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2007-01-25 15:04]

I like the perspective here, Carolina, and the position of the subject hanging on the 2 ends. Good one!

ciao, Cristian

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  • angel Gold Star Critiquer [C: 69 W: 0 N: 7] (277)
  • [2007-09-17 1:15]

ciao!
prefrisco senza dubbio questa versione...non so il fatto che si veda tutta la linea del bordo della piscina e lo sfondo mi sembra che completi tutto.

Ciao!!!
Angelo

Bonjour Carolina

Je préfčre cette version, la composition me semble plus forte avec cette partie noire en haut
Amicalement

Sylvain

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