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• Silke (23588)
• [2008-11-13 6:01]

Welcome to Trek Lens, Anastasia
It is nice to have another Canadian on board. However, I must confess that this is not the best picture with which to start your adventure on TrekLens. Although the focal point is clear, the composition simply leaves me cold. There is no real harmony here. It seems that you have been travelling: the photo location is VERY far from Canada. I look forward to seeing what else you have to offer TrekLens.

A few tips to make TrekLens easier and more fun:
- Read ABOUT (and FAQ)!
- Add your camera to your introduction (see Profiles, Equipment Profile)
- Take full advantage what TrekLens allows: up to 800 pixels along one on the sides of the picture and up to 300 Kbs file size!
- Always write more than 4 lines of NOTES. You can use them to explain more of the process and/or your motivation. That allows members to give you points for usefulness and gives them a chance to learn more too!
- Each time you post a picture, take the time to visit at least 10 pictures in the Gallery to write a critique of the works of other photographers. Observing (and critiquing) the successes and errors of other members make for great opportunities to learn!
- Make use of the workshop (you’ll learn more about your own strengths and weaknesses by helping others improve)
I am sure that these ideas will help you make the most of your stay on the site!!
TFS (Thank-you For Sharing)
Silke

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• Mrlittle (5579)
• [2008-11-14 13:03]

Hello Anastasia.
Beautiful and strong shot. Nice composition.
The top or the photo can you cut off. That make it stronger.
Regards and goodluck Frans