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Hello, Marek -
Moving image, great composition. The POV through the door looking outside is a good one, and I like that the old woman is just inside the left part of the doorframe. The arched doorway in the background is a nice inclusion. Well done.
- yucely
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(948) - [2008-03-03 9:50]
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Hi Marek;
Very nice shot but its qadraj was deviated slightly at the left side.Cong.,Tfs Regaard.
Yücel
I like the composition of this image, it makes you thing. I like the way the women is position, the darker wall inside works a bit as a frame. I don't like the image leening to the left, the highlights of the background needs to be tone down, or burn a bit. I did post a copy on workshop, to help show you a bit how i see it.
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