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Portrait
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Copyright: alexandra scharffenorth (alscha) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 10 N: 5] (299)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-07
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Casio EXILIM EX-Z750
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/8 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-06-21 15:25
Viewed: 615
Points: 6
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Hi everyone,
This is one of my first portraits i tried, its natural light and a black backdrop. Please let me know what you think and how i could improve, thanks a lot for your help, looking forward to seeing all the amazing photos!!
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  • exenta Gold Star Critiquer [C: 424 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-06-21 15:35]
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Buen retrato que veo en blanco y negro.
Saludos

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2006-06-21 15:43]
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Hi Alexandra and welcome to TL! This is a lovely lady and I like her pose. I was surprised this was natural light because the highlights are very hot or "washed out". In your next adventure you could have placed a shear curtain, towel, or some fabric over the window or light source to help soften the light a little. Good job and keep on posting! B

Very nice portrait Alexandera and welcome in Treklens.

Regards,

Johannes

Good first portrait Alexandra, nice warm colours too, head tilt looks a bit too much and there is a bit of over exposing, as Brent said already, soften the light and avoid direct lighting..

Alaettin

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