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Pregnancy
Photo Information
Copyright: alexandra scharffenorth (alscha) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 20 W: 10 N: 5] (299)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-12-02
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Casio EXILIM EX-Z750
Exposure: f/5.1, 1/8 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Pregnant women [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-06-23 16:29
Viewed: 1050
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took this shot of a pregnant woman (5th month)on my digital compact camera and did quite a lot of pos-processing. please let me know what you think!! thanks a lot!!
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To mimoza: thanksalscha 1 10-23 08:36
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Hi Alexandra
Let us know what post-processing you did to get this effect.
Overall the light is good but a few flares here and there from the overexposed background. Good use of noise and blurring. Points given for the lower 1/3rd of the photo only - the top portion makes me uncomfortable.
Rew

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  • Rob Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 194 W: 5 N: 14] (1466)
  • [2006-06-23 17:21]

Hi Alexandra, i think the noise in this really promotes the feel and meaning of the picture. :)

hmm, i like the context and the subject of this photograph, having said that I think the pov here is great but I think the blur and the burn that happens to be in this effect works against the shot.

The grain is quite artistic, and the picture shows a good balance of dark/light-amounts, so it's well composed/cropped.
Good work Alexandra !

a very very nice portrait. Great compo, superb idea to set it to B&W with grain. Very well done! A pregnant women is very beautiful and you really express that in this shot. Sexy and she really feels confident.

TFS

hi alexandra,
i like the portrait you've captured here. most of the pregnant shots i've seen are intimate and calm but i find this one sexy even it has a bulge. the grain added interest plus the contrast of clothing and skin (background as well). tfs.
jeff

Dear Alexandra
What a nice idea of you to share your blessed situation with us in TL! The continuing miracle of giving life and birth ..The contrast here is good so well done and a late welcome to Treklens ^_^
You will get my points later and bye for now.

John T
Bristol? Wonderfull town.. I remember the 'Cristmass Steps ' there and Clifton Suspension bridge in Portishead .. great area !

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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 381 W: 3 N: 21] (1350)
  • [2006-06-24 10:42]

nice work Alexandra

I think it's brilliant! First the framing is very well chosen.
1/ The fact that her belly points on the right bottom side of the pic talks about the near future of the baby that soon will be out ;o)
2/ The B&W is very sensuel, so as the pose of the mother with her hand pulling up the shirt.
3/ The grain and "blur" is very well done here. It gives also a feeling of a radioscopic view! Instead of seeing the foetus, we see it from outside with the same impression of intimacy.
BRILLIANT !! ;o)
Sincerly,
Pris.

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  • SRB Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 0 N: 51] (803)
  • [2006-06-26 13:48]

great picture, beautifull tones and i love the movement in it! this is a modern picture of pregnancy!
great job!
srb

Hi Alexandra,
this one is even more beautiful, great image soft and delicate at the same time strong and sexy.
Superb!
Patrick

my favorite in you albums! best
regards

i agree with rewshearer about the lower 1/3 of the photo..is great and sexy. love it.

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