The Queen

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• rgagnon (2118)
• [2008-04-02 4:31]
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interesting idea ;o)
in my point of view, the depth of field is too small ( focus on nails??)
but i like the idea

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• xodroolis (497)
• [2008-04-02 4:53]
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Yes very good idea but i must agree. why focus only on nails and queen? try to focus on the hole hand.
Good work though!

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• lisapw1 (5434)
• [2008-04-02 17:40]

Hi Leilani,

I like the idea that you have, but I must agree about the focus. I think it would have also been an interesting shot with all pieces in focus.

I appreciate your efforts in photoshop!

Lisa

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• phlenain (187)
• [2008-04-16 7:19]

hello,
it seems you like red color... another interesting shot, great scene. good idea... it's just look a bit strange to cut that straightly the face of your model; it perhaps could have been less "raw" to have a more blury and darker background. anyway, I like your shot!
tfs
Philippe

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• trewheeler (430)
• [2008-06-18 1:26]
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I like where you are going here, and you've done really well creatively. You are saying 'something' here but I'm not sure what. I think it could be more powerful if perhaps you could see her taking a knight or a king. It would make more of a statement that it is currently. Regards, TW

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• josediogo1958 (3733)
• [2008-06-18 2:14]
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My dear Leilani
How nice find you here!
Great capture my dear.Wonderful POV composition and lovely colours.
Friendly greetings from Portugal
José Diogo