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• Victor (3388)
• [2005-12-14 17:07]

Wow... very nice work Elena.
Regards,
Victor

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• Valich (7)
• [2005-12-16 15:21]
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Very good light. It seems that radial blur (zoom ~ 10) will work better than canvas effect.
TFS
v.

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• kitflorendo (0)
• [2005-12-17 3:31]

Quality is good. Lighting very inviting and an interesting view outside the window.
Leaving the camera case (?) on the table spoils it, as does a small part of your companion on the RHS.
I know - done on the spur of the moment.

Came back, saw the WS. Good solving of the problem by Valich. Now, the concentration is directed to the centre of the image and the two points I mentioned earlier are much reduced.

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• samr (3323)
• [2006-01-30 13:52]

Hi elena,
I like thie simplicity in the shot - it emits a relaxing "enjoy the food" cozy mood. Although the workshop is good work, I find the radial blur adds speed that doesn't quite match the slower mood of this shot. The camera bag and elbow add a homey non-commercial touch, which is quite fitting with the houses across the street in the background. Overall, a very nice shot. TFS, Sam
Sam