Our gardens not quite like this!

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• Fisher (5728)
• [2006-03-12 19:20]
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Hi John,

Come ce Come ca, you did well. It's o.k. sorry dude, huh.?
I don't do this often.

Mike

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• KellEy (2074)
• [2006-03-12 20:37]
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Good detail, nice colour.
I think had you stepped to the right and crouched, it would be a better POV. Just my opinion though. This is very "in the moment".
TFS

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• cstathoulis (13323)
• [2006-03-13 3:42]

Hi John,

Lovely photo and colours!
Seems like a paradise!!
I like the fact that the natural light makes the shadows, the colours and shapes more intense and vivid.
Well done!!

Constantinos

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• harpya (8984)
• [2006-03-13 11:35]

Hi john,

It is a beautiful look, this whole green
detaching the white lilies, it is perfect
his creativity here was wonderful,
it completed the garden with a beautiful look
Congratulations, taste of this!

Sérgio

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• Refugee (25532)
• [2006-03-13 15:37]
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Seems we try something different John and get done for it. I like the PP work mate, something I would not even attempt. Perhaps some sharpening of the background before adding the lilies? Who knows. Well done anyway. TFS
Dave
PS Many thanks for your comment on Pano I

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• joebatista (5412)
• [2006-03-14 3:55]
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I love the wet greens and the soft beautiful flowers, very well composed and well done John.
Well done
Thanks for sharing buddy

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• tropicalrips (0)
• [2006-03-15 9:28]
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beautiful colors and details here John :)
i like the POV, feels like we are there looking down into the water

excellent PP with the lilly, i didn't know they were PPed until i read your note :)
the only thing i see not quite rite is the depth, a little blur effect on the rocks would do the trick :)
good work

PS: i tried a little workshop to see if i can that blur to giv the image more depth, hope you don't mind :)

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• Dingo (11948)
• [2006-03-16 12:58]
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I can see Mike's point about the left hand side, John. Still, I think by cropping just to the left of the big stone it could look a bit less 'spacy' there. I think not only the flowers steal the show, the small cascade (I do see some drops, right?) is interesting too.
Nice PP work on the flowers, looks natural to me but maybe the biggest flowers might have been a bit brighter as the lower flowers are burnt by the sunlight.
Anyway, TFS

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• LunaSun (142)
• [2006-04-08 17:47]

Belles couleurs et agréable fraicheur!

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• emanetkerem (4918)
• [2006-04-17 5:19]
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Hello John
Very nice flowers.Good shooting.
Very nice colours.Well done.
TFS

Kerem

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• sangeeth_sg (0)
• [2006-04-25 8:34]
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natural light provides good effects here.
white flowers are really appealing.
presence of beautiful greenary
liked it

sangeeth