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Except for a Grey Cloud


Except for a Grey Cloud
Photo Information
Copyright: Tim Wheeler (trewheeler) Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 1 N: 33] (411)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-12
Categories: Decisive Moment
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-17 16:43
Viewed: 175
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 16
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A wheatfield in Alresford, Essex. All rather picturesque, except for the grey cloud. Or is it?

Thanks for looking, TW
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Wow Tim, this is a nice colour for both the weat and the sky but, wouldn,t it be better if those weat be focus a bit ? i would prefer is the weat to be clearer. anyway thanks for sharing. it's a good photo.

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 257 W: 56 N: 359] (3103)
  • [2008-07-17 17:42]

Hi Tim,I do like,that the foregrounds, single wheatsheaf is sharp & detailed, but I'm unsure about the dark cloud at the right,it does balance with the darker foreground corner.I looked at it being cropped, just slightly above the tree line, with just a hint of the white clouds showing & that works for me,rather, than the inclusion of the whole sky with that ominous black cloud.
TFS

Ron

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  • bigil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 174 W: 4 N: 47] (1183)
  • [2008-07-17 17:57]

Bravo Tim quelle belle image. Félicitation. Gilles

Very nice dramatic sky... I like the inclusion of the dark cloud - stands out nicely against the wheat.
Image could be LARGER..
Regards
David

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 6 N: 417] (2655)
  • [2008-07-17 18:59]

Hi Tim.
Nice soft focus on the FG wheat. The arched wheat is a nice touch. Did you make that cloud so dark? TFS. K2

The cloud is very picturesque (but I hope it stays in your part of the world :) It looks like a nasty storm brewing. I love the colors in this. Very nice sharpness! Excellent lighting. TFS and have a happy day!

Great composition!

Regards,
Carla

hi trewheeler,

i like your portrait pov and the details are good in the fg.
the sky looks very good with a threatening cloud on the horizion.
a well composed image with good colours throughout.

regards c.d.

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