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Copyright: Ben Tucker (kruger) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 177 W: 5 N: 132] (978)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-08-17
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon Digital Rebel XT 350D, Sigma 55-200mm F4-5.6
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): People... [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-11-07 20:18
Viewed: 693
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My Darling.

She hates this photograph but i finally got her permission to post it, she thinks that because she had little time or notice to get ready for her picture being taken that the shot is not very good but i personally think it captures her perfectly

the hair and make-up might not be perfect but she is to me

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To LCannon: Hi Lorikruger 1 05-23 06:00
To schapman: Thanks Shellykruger 1 11-14 07:35
To laurielblack: Thanksyoukruger 1 11-08 08:31
To brosnea: Thankskruger 1 11-08 08:23
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Hello. good Portrait. Nice prespective. This is a great work! I´m glad that the model gave you the permission to post it. Well done. :)

I think this is awesome....great natural feel and wonderful expression. :)

hello Ben !

I agree this B&W portrait is indeed very nice and ntural.
TFS . Smily to both !
Robert

Ready or not, this shot is just excellent.

As others has said, the mood is perfectly natural and very nice smile too.

Maybe she hates this picture, but let her read the critiques she'll change her mind :)

Good portrait, Ben
tfs
v.

Hi Ben,
Tell your darling that her portrait's very nice : she's so natural with her tiny smile :) I like your composition, very good DOF. Nice W/B, maybe a little burnt on some parts, but no matter, it's good work.
Martine

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  • redol Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 260 W: 33 N: 12] (2254)
  • [2005-11-08 7:04]
  • [2]

Great portrait.
Black and white worked good. A smile to be thankful to the handsome model.
Regards.

Hello Ben,

This is a great portrait of your Darling! The composition is very good along with wonderful B&W tones. Candid shots in my opinion make the best portraits. TFS
Kevin

Wooooooow!

Very very wonderful shot!!!
Perfect light, great composition!
She is very pretty!

Congratulations, good job!!!
Chris

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2115 W: 92 N: 1856] (10317)
  • [2005-11-10 21:16]
  • [2]

Hi Ben,

I like her expression and the little smile she has, she looks very natural and the pose is great and your DOF excellent. TFS
Luc

beautiful portrait!very natural and a very nice smile and look.i like her expresion.she looks like a nice person :) good composition and lightning.well done!

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  • Victor Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 392 W: 29 N: 232] (3388)
  • [2005-11-12 19:30]

Hi Ben,
Exellent shot, nice B&W, she have a very nice smile. Well done.
Regards,
Victor

Hello Ben,
A beautiful photo and in my opinion her best that i've seen so far. She looks so natural and relaxed!
TFS this moment and thanks for your lovely girl for her permission.
Regards,

Shelly.

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2005-11-15 19:40]

Yes i agree with you, that's the great shot, in a right time & right moment you got here. simply natural! Very well done!

Wong

Nice shot. I like how the angle of her body makes the composition... very sharp this... nice.

Hello Ben!
I also think that it worked out ok :)
Natural portraits are always the best.
Well done!

Ben,
Good job capturing her mood and expression. It looks very natural and the lighting and POV is great.
Paul

Half the fun of this photo is trying to figure out just what she's thinking behind that grin. She has a lovely smile, and a twinkle in her eye that's priceless. I love the candid shot, even without makeup she's a beauty who I don't think needs to use any to improve a perfect look. Very nice portrait.

excellent portrait ben :)
the b/w is very good
excellent tones and contrast, i like the DOF

k

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