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Dead Centre!
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Copyright: Beverley Robinson (Royaldevon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1664 W: 375 N: 4236] (16512)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-05
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D200, nikon70-300f4.5-5.6g
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-08-16 1:21
Viewed: 238
Points: 58
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Good Morning Everyone,

My post, this morning, shows a Painted Lady butterfly feeding from the buddleia blossom.

I have never really noticed previously, how the proboscis of the butterfly enters the blossom dead centre, to find the nectar store.

Besides cropping the shot and adding a border, I used a little artistic licence to copy and paste the individual blossoms over the edge of the border. I hope you like the effect.

Many thanks for your interest.
Please feel free to offer feedback on any aspect of the photograph. Bev :-)

gnada, dareco, cunejo200, hay_kes, Margy, harpya, mesquens1, urs0114, Sharpshooter, parasbhalla, chrisJ, horias has marked this note useful
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To hay_kes: Dead Centre!Royaldevon 1 08-16 08:33
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Beverley,
What a wonderful capture...what a great composition...lovely colors, very sharp. nice POV and BG.
Congratulation!
Horia

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1302 W: 0 N: 2586] (20765)
  • [2009-08-16 1:25]

Hello,

Fantastique macro, quel beau papillon avec le fleur bleue, la belle coueur sur ces ailes, une merveille, splendide macro.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4248 W: 414 N: 6735] (42365)
  • [2009-08-16 1:26]

Hi Beverley

I like how the image spills out over the frame. A superb floral macro, with the added bonus of the colourful butterfly, sitting atop the flower. Good warm cold colour contrasts, between the orange & blue, with excellent dof & sharpness. Tfs!

Good morning, Beverley!

Another impressive capture, and this time the Painted Lady has the honor to become your subject!

The sharpness and POv are nicely chosen and the innovation of making a great frame is very interesting indeed. The colors are natural. I like the busy position of the butterfly. Well seen!

Have a nice Sunday.

thanks and regards,
Paars Bhalla

Hi Beverley,
Nice artwork and presentation, but I'm not so happy with the focusing, a very shallow DOF!
A nice position of the butterfly busy collecting pollen from this wonderful flower.
A nice blurred BG!
Good lighting and good details on the lower part of the wings!
If it were in sharp focusing this capture would be a real winner!
I give full merits for composition and artwork!
Regards,

Francis Xavier

Hi Bev,
Good shot, I like the way you've cropped the flowers to spill out over the frame. Nice sharpness, the flat bokeh effect for the BG works well. Good use of the focal length too, well seen.

TFS,
Scott.

Salut Beverley.
Tu as donné à cette image une belle mise en page belle et originale qui met en valeur ce splendide papillon.
Félicitation.
Bon dimanche.
Urs

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  • john1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 178 W: 0 N: 195] (1592)
  • [2009-08-16 2:50]

Hi Beverley,

Excellent macro, very good presentation.
The details, sharpness and colors are great.
Good job.
Have a good sunday.
John

Excellent top of the butterfly, excellent composition, with the blurred background, congratulations, hugs

Bom dia Bev,
I like your "artistic license", is beutiful.
I like the composition and use of space and BG.
I like the clearness and sharpness of FP.
Great one!
Best regards,
Raimundo

Ciao Beverley



The wing pattern is skillfully captured,
with the fake eyes as a dominant feature!
Good colour reproduction, sharp details and the subject is well framed...

Greetings,


Sergio

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  • Margy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 6 N: 227] (2512)
  • [2009-08-16 6:34]

Hi Beverly,

What a very nice photo of the butterly at work.
Nice colors and details. Good composition and very nice presentation this way, I like it!
Regards, Marga

Hi Bev,
Just a wonderful macro vith shapness, colours and details are perfect.TFS.
Cheers,
Have a nice Sunday,

hAyAti

Simply superb composition Dear...
Nice light .Vived colors.
thanks for sharing such masterpieces..
regards
Khawar

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 366 W: 0 N: 436] (2349)
  • [2009-08-16 8:54]

Hi Bev,
Lovely composition, I love the out of frame shots and you have done well with this one. Colour and focus brilliant - nice post.
Cheers
Bri

Hi Beverly,

wonderful macro. good composition, lovely colors, pretty sharp details. good pov and dof.
thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Sanjib.

You nailed the composition and pp work Bev. Don't I just get excited with butterfly photos, they appear difficult to photograph, and when you capture one well, there is satisfaction. the ws version is indeed sharper. best regards.
Danilo

Olá Beverley

Uma foto graciosa desta borboleta colorida
nestas flores tão delicadas...
Parabéns
Grande abraço,
Vera

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2009-08-16 15:25]

A very helpful note explaining what you have done and I like the results. Very pretty colors and superb detail once again. TFS

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 3 N: 531] (3606)
  • [2009-08-16 21:50]

hello Bev,
this is a prettily presented butterfly composition. There's just enough sharpness on the butterfly(although your workshop improves this) and this is complimented by a nice bokeh. I like your work with the blossoms on the border.
best regards,
bev

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2254 W: 175 N: 0] (29118)
  • [2009-08-16 23:57]

Morning Bev ;)
Simple, beautiful design...TFS
Have a nice week,
J ;)

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 245 W: 0 N: 253] (1730)
  • [2009-08-21 9:26]

Hi Bev,
Another fantastic macro with perfect details.
Very beautiful contrast of colours on the background.
Excellent PP work.
Regards.
Ciao. Vanda :-))

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4764] (21697)
  • [2009-08-23 7:42]

Hi Beverley...

Another very impressive close up capture..!
Great colors, contrast and & presentation.
Very nice PP work - Bravo...
Rgd.
George

Hi Bev'
Nice idea using out of the frame to make a 3D view
Good colors and focus, just I wish a little wider DOF by increasing f.stop...
Best wishes
Alireza

Ciao bev, beautiful macro of lovely Vanessa cardui, fantastic colors and beautiful blurry BG, I like a lot, brava, ciao Silvio

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1705 W: 124 N: 1455] (20570)
  • [2009-09-04 23:12]

hi Beverley,
great double macro and very nice presentation.Beautiful colours.TFS.Necla.

Hi Bev,

Bravo! Very nice composition - creative and original idea. I like it! Well done and TFS.

Martyn

Excellent macro, very good presentation.
Details, sharpness , colors and frame are great.
Zoran

Hello Beverley,
very beautiful close up of a Vanessa taken from a good POV with excellent sharp,
the vertical frame is very good, perfect exposure and very nice colours.
Best regards Siegfried

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