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Beauty


Beauty
Photo Information
Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 24 N: 35] (2955)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-15
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 85mm f/1.2 L
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Merc'hed goant/Lovely girls [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-09-22 17:16
Viewed: 321
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken with natural light, no reflector was used, just careful positioning of subject.
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hi martin, nice capture of her portrait, the details are clear, sharp picture, good composition and the bg gives the model a clear nice face. Well done my friend.

Pio

beau portrait Martin,

I like contrast of wood and the girl's skin ; beautiful light,

congratulations,

dd, île de la Réunion

Hi Martin..nice portrait...well composed..nice light and tones.

Roger

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1654 W: 24 N: 0] (12462)
  • [2009-09-22 23:48]

Hi Martin...
Beautiful portrait with so nice composition...
Nice colors, light...
Regards...
Andro

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 506 W: 111 N: 664] (3003)
  • [2009-09-23 0:29]
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Beautiful capture Martin
Loved those pretty eyes.

Excellent sharpness and clarity. Great use of natural light!
IMHO the available b/g u've used was good but at the same time i think how if there was a little distance between the subject and the b/g to provide a little narrow DOF (using f/4 maybe???), Just to make out the model more prominent, though she is but a little blur at the b/g (just personal opinion) i can guess u've used the b/g in focus intentional, which may have some idea behind :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

Hi Martin,

Your notes say it all, natural light,good positioning and gorgeous model,nice one.

Douglas

Excellent sharpness well done ,I`ve got this lens and i love it! I like the wood behind her.
D.K

A delicately carried-out portrait, Martin.
The light is beautiful, indeed, and I particularly like the harmony between your model and the wooden background: somehow, her skin colour and the texture of the wood go well together. Perhaps that's why the focus being on the wood rather than on your model (see KBE's comment) does not bother me here.
Lovely pose and good composition as well.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

Hi Martin,

a good portrait and a beautiful model here.
good composition and nice tones here.

Tfs,
sanjib.

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 346 W: 3 N: 246] (3223)
  • [2009-09-23 14:32]

Hi Martin,
good work, the lighting, composition and clarity are excellent - I like the slight tilt of the head and a very attractive lady always helps
cheers
Jack

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