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Photo Information
Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 27 W: 24 N: 38] (2579)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-18
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 85mm f/1.2 L
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-18 4:56
Viewed: 247
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I like the rather vampish feel to this. Do not mess with this girl.
Martin
Taken using light bounced off a tri reflector from a soft box, and another light with a snoot to act as a hair light.
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I like this one, well done Martin.
I would call this a very high quality shoot.
thanks for sharing.
cheers

Hi Martin,
WOW what a beautiful model this lady is, she has the most perfect skin and those eyes, well they would knock men off there feet.
I love the real vibrant colours, it suits her as well.
Great lighting, detail and colours,
TFS
Jane

Another great shot of Heather. Her eyes are captivating !

Okay, im going to completely disagree with bulibasa, I liked the crop in the other one better. How it was far to the left, leaving alot of negative space creates alot more interest.

I like her expression in this one though, I think I see an attempt to hide a smile here. :) Its cute.

I will tell you this though, you are a master at lighting and are an inspiration to me to keep trying to improve my lighting techniques.

And im going to go buy a six pack of New Castle tonight as well,haha.

Hi Martin,
Heather is wonderful, also with this new look!
The shot is great!
TFS,
Flaminia

Martin,
Great portrait. You're obviously a very accomplished photographer. The lighting is superb as are the colours that jump out at you. Love the contrast of the beauty of the model and the bottle.
Its almost got a Dave Hill feel to it who is my favourite photographer.
Well done.
Graham

Another nice one, perfect details and good textures. Love her eye contact.
Rew

Bonjour Martin, before I saw your name, I recognized the quality! Good care of details like the color of her hair, nails and the straw. Congratulations!
P.S. I just ordered "the lens" today. Waiting for it now....

Stunning! The black background really brings out the dramatic colors of her hair, eyes, and lips. A fantastic product endorsement as well.

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